|Reviewed by Michelle
This poem really touched me. The love a child is pure and it will change your heart and soul forever. I know that you will be a wonderful father and role model for your future children.
|Reviewed by Theresa
|Jim very good poem. Good luck with all of your poems my friend. Hugs and Kisses|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Nicely done, and a lovely tribute. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a good write
(the diference between
uncle and father being
uncle can give 'em back!)
you'll do fine in both role
|Reviewed by Kimberlee
|Great work. The two that you speak of are truly amazing. They deserve this and more. They are such bright young men and seeing how you interact with them on a personal level lets me know you're ready for the role of being someone's father. Brilliant work. Love you.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is beautifully written and very, very touching.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a fine tribute to the two young men you mention, which also shows your desire to be a father someday. I wish you all the best;-).|
|Reviewed by Carissa Brookens
This is a lovely poem, to two people. You deserve some happiness and I'm glad that they can bring it to you. *hugs my friend*
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely Jim, How much this lovely poem touches me this morning, I know you shall make a fine father one day, and your sons will be as wonderful a man as you..