The nights are colder,
My loneliness, is deeper,
The darkness longer,
My desires are drenched,
I've held back, for many years,
We've never been apart,
Nor experienced, broken hearts,
This is really something,
For me, it's strangely new,
As I lick a salty tear,
Running down my cheek
In tracks, streaming down a line,
The same lick, that savor,
The sweetness of yours,
Down along forgotten times.
By: William Bonilla
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|this one hit me straight in the eyes and heart......need my kleenex.....wait.....dammit William this was a tearjerker okay.....my eyes are still watery....
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Expressive write ... I feel your sadness. Sending hugs. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dear William...Majestic write...overflow of emotions...love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Great emotive poem, William.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|This is wonderful. Nicely done.
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hey William, You nailed this one with a high hard fast ball.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|My, that is lovely, William.|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
I salute you on this piece, it represents an inner area uncovered in beauty to behold, grand piece sir.
Rodney Evan Bohen
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This is a lonely write, I felt it. Nicely done|
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