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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
4/19/2003 |
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If you look outside I'll bet the rock was 'moved' by your ode to it ;)!
Good job!
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
4/19/2003 |
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| Very unique poem, & I enjoyed it very much! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
4/18/2003 |
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| Grand work made me think deep |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/18/2003 |
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more twisted i think...you rock....I twist...
Rock on!!!
Love
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
4/18/2003 |
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| I love this, Paul!! Haha, the twists, the turns, the loops, fantastic and the musings are exquisite!! You are so lucky to have that rock in your life!! :) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/18/2003 |
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This was great! I loved it!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
4/18/2003 |
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| you rock |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
4/18/2003 |
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| Rock on! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/18/2003 |
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| Hey Paul, good rock write. My rock I had to haul it from the park. almost killed me. It's kind of big. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
4/18/2003 |
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Ditto on what Erica said.
Nice work |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/18/2003 |
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Nature...always changing form...
Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
4/18/2003 |
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| Perhaps it does see and feel... Who are we to say... Everything on this earth is living.. here for a reason... That is a life... Loved this write.. Love your stone/rock. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/18/2003 |
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| but...indeed the rock is alive...and you have honored it wonderfully with this recognition.. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
4/18/2003 |
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| I love this, awesome work, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
4/18/2003 |
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| Great! You've provoked all sorts of thoughts for me to ponder! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/18/2003 |
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| Paul whatever you write is divine...you've a beautiful command of language....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/18/2003 |
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| Interesting thoughts to ponder on. It would of been great seeing the changes in that rock as the tree brought it fully into view. Interesting that an act of nature showed the gift of life so well. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/18/2003 |
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You're exercising my brain for me this morning, Paul! I'm off to make myself a coffee and think this through. I agree with Bobbi and congratulate you also.You're very deserving.
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
4/18/2003 |
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Good Morning, Paul
Excellent thought provoking write.
pax
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
4/18/2003 |
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| I don't know where the rock came from, but this poem came from a very creative mind. btw, congrats on being the resident poet of the month on thepoets.org. |
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