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|Reviewed by Phoebe
|It's great keep up this work|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well...I guess that is why it is called seamless. I like it...[smiles] [It does need spellcheck}|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This was too long. I was intimidated by the run-on sentences. Hope a little spell-check and a little re-constructive surgery to this poem will help.
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Jeremy de Laroche (Reader)
|Ok Ben Fowler, my bestest friend.
I nearly died when i read this poem. WHERE ARE THE FULL STOPS? I HAD TO READ IT WITHOUT BREATHING!!!!!
Hahehe. And there were some spelling mistakes also, but, never the less, it was a lovely poem. Beautiful, Melodeous. and i think i spelt that last word wrong, hehe. but, anyway. It was a lovely poem write. Keep up the good work, you have never disappointed me yet in any aspect of your poems, your life, or your friendship:)
|Reviewed by Bill Murray
|Yes Ben, hopefully the darkness will divide and you will find this is just a dream. Bill|