|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|The tone of this is romantic and sensual, as if she welcomes this invisible stranger. It's a white contrast to the truth of such a black, and horrifying experience. The truth is a feeling of violation, much like rape. Unfortunately, I have some insight on this topic. I like your version of the legend better! Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Adulterer and paramour that is what it could be,
once the author refers to thirteenth century.
In those days one could buy all kind of privileges from "The Roman See".
So the priests developed a tale to justify adultery when practiced by the Rich.
"Incubus, and Sucubus", the female for incubus became the nightmare players, while the adulteresses and adulteres enjoyed their love affairs.
This poem "Incubus or Paramour" is a masterpiece by all standards.
I have enjoyed reading and digesting "Incubus or Paramour".
I congratulate the Author of "Incubus or Paramour".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
|mmhot..erotic...yes, I agree, hands are nice..LOL
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow. Don't know HOW I missed this. It is sensual and sweet too. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|All I can say is excellent writing Lady A|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Lady A-Great poem and a sensual fantasy indeed! BTW I'm a fan of your work also you know. ;-)
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I enjoyed this deeply :) Very well fantasized! Teresa
P.S. This one deserves a BIG FAT *high 5*
|Reviewed by Sherrie Rose (Reader)
|Awesome writing, Anita. You are fantastic. I love a fantasy poem!|
|Reviewed by Jay G
|Yes...very mystical and sensual...very interesting. (And as they might have said..."Blame it on the Incubus")|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|outstanding presentation of a deeply desirable fantasy that has its roots in reality...|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|a lot of thought in this m'lady?|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..This was so excellent! I loved this one!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Outstanding, so mystical and sensual.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|OMG I'm damned for all time...|
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|oh, so beautiful, so sensual, arousing...and oh, I'd pick 'paramour'...I, Oh, your words are too Romantic, too, well..sigh, sigh, sighing, ahhhhh... to be Incubus...and Oh, Lady A., such beautiful phrasing of fantasy, desire and ah, all! ++++++++++
what a dream, could it be real, oh, would that it could, and one could smile within sweetdreams...no, no Icubus...I hope, LOL...
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|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Anita, how fantastic a writing this is. Did I ever tell you of an apartment i lived in that was haunted by a woman of suicide. If not I will write of Eve Baker.
God Bless You & your loved ones, honey.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
You're good at this. I love it.. Excellent.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Beautifully sweet verse. Great job. Happy Easter.....
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Wow Lady A., the Spirits were mingling with the flesh in this poem. And evil or not, they seem to have been thoroughly enjoyed. Excellent poetry. Bill|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|LOvely my friend, the sweet verse make up for any deficit in the picture and there is none!
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|has someone been sleeping well? nice poem|