|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Loved this little poem!
Keep it up :):)
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Cute, Kool wtite....Tony
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Tony Tony Tony,
Such a naughty boy...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well if this doesn't leave me with some naughty imagery...|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Tony, you are quite the ladies man. You should write an entire adventure series on your s-excapades.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|this is the 3rd version of Jack/and the beanstalk & Jill.
This is the most passionate! :-)
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Tony as soon as I read that title i knew something exciting was coming, and coming, and coming. X-rated my man.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|That was quite funny!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Tony you are so naughty!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Tony this is hilarious...I love it. Well done.
A very Happy Easter to you
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
see you soon on my broom...........stick!!!!
What a hickery dickery Jack and Jill prick thrill this was.... < < <smiles>>>
Awesome work of art
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford