|Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
|Out of this pain comes the wisdom to realise you cannot change someones perceptions... and if you try, you kill an essential part of you. You write where i've walked.... beautiful verse
|Reviewed by Russ Okamura
|Your words are very profound and passionate, you write with a true HEART!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Jing, you have salvaged wisdom from pain and hurt. Good for you dear. Now your heart can go on and not make the same mistake. May God give you strength. bill|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh how deeply your sad and lovely poem touched me today,
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Why repeat your mistakes.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Love yourself and you will find the one who can love you as well.|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|We all make mistakes my friend. let us learn from our mistakes. Knowing ourselves and knowing what we want is almost all the work done. good luck the next time.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|If you can't be yourself, you have nothing. I can relate to this. I hope that a true and healthy love finds you soon. Great write.
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Jing, Powerful emotion in this writing. I hope you do not stick to your present thinking.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
No Thing Learned Nothing Gained!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|short powerful write,
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|wonderful work! don't close yourself up too tight. Let some sun's rays in|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|If you can't be you, you have nothing. Well done on an insightful poem. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|It must be the way the other wants you to be
Never say never, just a thought
Thanks for the poem, and putting your sketch
on for all to see. Have a safe Easter.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well expressed, I'm glad there is a note of hope Jing;-)...all the best to you;-)|