|Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
|Linda: My mother shot herself to death when I was just eleven. This is painful for me to read and it's even more painful for me to write right now. My mother was such a sweet woman. She loved Siamese cats. I have a Siamese cat lamp that was hers. She died when she was 46--the same age I am now. You have done a wonderful job with this poem. You have to be incredibly empathetic to be able to write something like this.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|...and loved ones are left in the cold...but we don't judge, do we? Many people call suicide cowardly, but to me, it depends. One of my loved ones...he was brave, let's put it that way. Unbearable is unbearable. Whether you have felt these feelings yourself -- and I pray you have not --, or are writing with someone else in mind, you understand. And it h u r t s. But you are doing what you can. Be proud! Phyllis|
|Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek
|Oh I do hope this is only a poem about suicide. I felt the painful words also the screams of the silence. The darkness, demons and the raw pain I know all too well.
This was written very clearly. I just hope it is not real!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|CHILLING! :( ((((HUGS)))) hope this is FICTION! please email me if you need to talk! Love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Linda this is a powerful look into the despair that causes people to do anything to end it, trust it is fiction but is very realistic.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|That's only the begining of the pain, and as Trask said, you would be starting over when the objective is to get to the end.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Linda, awesome write. I could feel the pain in your heart and the cold steel on your temple. You did a wonderful job with this one my friend.|
|Reviewed by Sandoo
|One who sin always think of Suicide ...
One who worry of sin always think of Suicide ...
Give your life to god ..
Stop Think Of Suicide ...
Think of your success in life ...
You have a lot to do ...
Your Dream to become the best poet ...
Dont you remember that ...
Care your dream with lot purity ... You may win the race ...
Wish you all the best ...
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Linda, Sweet Linda, I truly hope this is just one of your fantastic poems, which you pen so well, and not any premeditated dark thoughts, We love you, there is always someone that love you, Tony Martin sang a song in the 50's " For every man there's a woman, and for every woman, there's a man"
Love & Peace ....William
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Linda, give me a spiritual hug and pull it together Lady. You are being very dark in your offerings. This is not good for you. Bill|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You have explained suicide very well
Some just can't deal with life
Everyone has thought about suicide, but to
dwell on it leeds to an end.
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|this was a powerfully dark and troubled poem i know this fiction but speaks out so much nice job on this one|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I tried and failed, against the odds, but now so glad I failed, I can empathise with this write..|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
I think we all have to think of some values of our lives. Everyone was born for a reason. God loves you, and many of your friends love you.
We also have to put values on others, and perhaps care for others. In this way, we don't have to wait for others to put values in us, for we know we are valuable to ourselves and as well as everyone else.
Back to your poem:
It is sooooo well-done! The feeling of self-pity and self-destruction is all there. You have described the state of mind of someone who might be in this situation very well. The readers can feel with you, pity the author. You have managed this write very well. Hope this was just fictional. Wonderful work!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Why do write such nonsence? Your answer to your problems is inside you my lovely friend. You are NOT UNLOVED!!
|Reviewed by TRASK
You Will Have To Come Back & Do It ALL Over Again,i.e. Maybe KILL YOURSELF a MILLION TIMES
Simply Because __You Do Not Die!
But, (God ) Guarantees You will Feel The PAIN!