im feelin mighty low (FICTION *)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, April 22, 2003
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so does my
head my heart
dont want to
get up just
want to stay
bed with my
wolves of life
i show my
ill stay here
in bed where
can hide and
not have to
face the world
cant take no
in my life
take the weight
on them now
and stomped on
one seems to
God dont hear
no car job
sucks big time
and God aint
phone line must
be off the
hook or else
to me cause
take it no
more just go
He dont care
why should you
*This is a fictional write, however,
I have felt the despair depression can
I've been there. TRUST ME. When I
hurt my back...when I had to learn to
live with disability and pain 24/7...
when I was married to a verbally abu-
sive man...when I lost custody of my
one and only child (a son)...when my
mother died...when cruel and hurtful
remarks were made to me...oh, believe
me...I wanted to give up. I really
felt like nobody cared...not even God.
God seemed far away and distant...I
wanted to die...because if He wouldn't
listen to me...who else would?
I now know that He was with me all of
the time...and He sustained me through
the lowest points in my life. He con-
tinues to strengthen me.
If I had taken my own life...look at
all I would have missed! I would have
missed my Gift for writing He so gen-
erously blessed me with...and I would
have missed meeting many talented au-
thors and making many friends...more
than I have ever had before.
DON'T GIVE UP...IT WILL EVENTUALLY GET
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|Reviewed by judeace
|sometimes we can learn much from being depressed...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|good write on depression, glad you rose above it...nice inspirational example Karla...|
|Reviewed by Jason Ganey (Reader)
|Depression can be a nasty thing, have had my battles with it before, enjoyed the read and your right, if we stick it out things do get better|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Hi sweetie never give up so glad it was fictional life is too short.
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|YES... YOU HAVE MADE TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE MOUNTAIN... GREAT WRITE!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This was good write. I'm glad you didn't take your own life.
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|fiction or no, it rings of truth
this is a mark of a great writer
proud to call you friend
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Your compassion for others show with this write. I know this feeling too. Woke up the other day feeling this way for reasons I won't go into but today I saw a beautiful dove flying and reminded myself that life does have treasures.|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|i have those days of giving up we just have to struggle on and that what I am doing trust me giving up is not the answer its just coward way out I SO GLAD this fiction but what fantastic fiction it is|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Life can get better
I know it's fiction, but you
do feel this way sometimes?
We all have. [[[[[[HUGS]]]]]]
|Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek
|God is only as far away as you push Him!
To you, God was not listening (at times) but He was, and I think you already know that.
Excellent write! Most days that IS how I feel. This poem may be fictional to you but not to me.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was wonderful...Gives me hope..
|Reviewed by Netta Jack
|AWESOME!!!! I felt this one. LOVED IT!!! And kudos for the honesty, you are both brave and inspirational!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|((((karla)))) i have been there, too, but in a way, i HAVEN'T. i haven't had to put up with a husband who belittled me or never had a child i eventually had to give up through NO fault of my own, i never had to go into the military or face surgery the way you did, and i never had to go on disability (tried; denied though!). you have gone through so much hell in your life; now it is time you have some HEAVEN in your life! it is time that god hears the cries of your heart and acts upon them! sure, we both would love for him to act on our requests NOW, but he WILL do so in HIS time! we both just have to learn to be patient is all; even though it IS hard! i know! and i hope you NEVER, EVER give up; you are too strong of a person to do so! i love you with all my heart! (((((HUGS)))) and MUCHO love, your twink, karen lynn. :) GOD BLESS YOU, KARLA; YOU DESERVE ALL THE BLESSINGS HE CAN GIVE YOU! :) heartfelt, emotion-filled write; so well done! outstanding job on this! :)|
|Reviewed by Ed G Rhea
|Hang in there. God answers prays in his own time when the time is right. If it weren't for bad how could we appreciate the good? I kow how you feel though as many of us have gone through what you have, but time heals all wounds.|