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Jeremy Huff

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You by Jeremy Huff Thursday, April 24, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan You push me and I fall You pull me and I come You touch me and I quiver You turn from me and I shake Your look grabs me Your scent holds me Your taste keeps me Your touch hurts me I am waiting for you I am staring at you I am yearning for you I am nothing without you I reach for your body I plead with your heart I beg you to stay I watch as you leave I stare at our pictures You make new ones I long for your voice You never call I yearn for your taste You give it to another I beg for you to return You beg for me to flee I go for your heart You lay there and die I want to die with you You do not wait I live to suffer forever You torment me forever We are together still
You push me and I fall You pull me and I come You touch me and I quiver You turn from me and I shake Your look grabs me Your scent holds me Your taste keeps me Your touch hurts me I am waiting for you I am staring at you I am yearning for you I am nothing without you I reach for your body I plead with your heart I beg you to stay I watch as you leave I stare at our pictures You make new ones I long for your voice You never call I yearn for your taste You give it to another I beg for you to return You beg for me to flee I go for your heart You lay there and die I want to die with you You do not wait I live to suffer forever You torment me forever We are together still

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Reviewed by J John (Reader)	4/24/2003

Intresting write .. havent seen emphasis created this way before J & J




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	4/24/2003

Well done, Jeremy. Welcome to the den. [Check your bio page when you get a chance. Your link doesn't work for some reason, and it looks to be a great link.]




Reviewed by Trixie Love	4/24/2003

Hi Jeremy... Welcome to the den family... This is such a great write... Hope to see much more. Trixie :)




Reviewed by Digital Fairy	4/24/2003

whoa...nice mix of sensuality...




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	4/24/2003

Welcome to the Den Jeremy Huff, This is excellent in emotions and feel to your verses... "I go for your heart You lay there and die I want to die with you You do not wait I live to suffer forever You torment me forever We are together still" Peggy