|Reviewed by J John (Reader)
|Intresting write .. havent seen emphasis created this way before J & J|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well done, Jeremy. Welcome to the den.
[Check your bio page when you get a chance. Your link doesn't work for some reason, and it looks to be a great link.]
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Welcome to the den
This is such a great
Hope to see much more.
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|whoa...nice mix of sensuality...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Welcome to the Den Jeremy Huff,
This is excellent in emotions and feel to your verses...
"I go for your heart
You lay there and die
I want to die with you
You do not wait
I live to suffer forever
You torment me forever
We are together still"