|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Perfect rhyme, meter and content. And so true!|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|We have to ear right? Take a walk through the woods..or a park. Well written! :)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent work as always, I was forced to get out from under the gun. Somehow we make it if we care enough to expend the energy to go in a different direction...|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Hey not all us skirts are deadly! ;O)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was great..I work with some very arrogant people, and you have described this so perfectly!
I loved this!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Jim not only is this great reading but your meter is perfect....what a wonderful read...it just flowed....don't we all feel under the gun at times.....floria|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by J John (Reader)
|Enter the rat race .. enjoyed :) J & J|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Jim, Great write about the back stabbers of the corporate world.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Okay, who's been talking to Forest Gump ?
Nicely done, Jim. Having been in the corporate world, I know of the indigestion. Bravo. A splendid read.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|My philosophy: A bad day's fishin' is better than a good day's workin'! Great write!!
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|would love to chat, but can't being one of those "skirts" my ownself no can do, gotta blow some smoke off my gun ha|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Jim, really excellent. Those hours of critique had to help some. (lol)You have to know which side your bread is buttered on. Such is life for most.|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
You told it like it
is, my friend.
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|LOL... Great poem to read while i'm here at work, can more than relate :)
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Boy do I understand this one,, I feel like I am always under the gun. Great write. Take it in stride!|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Reviewed by jude forese
|work sux, plain and simple... very good write...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Yes it is and it is a tough one to do all of the above but you penned the
antedote to making it a little bit
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|That is why I am self employed, I like to know whose finger is on the trigger and if the damn thing is loaded.|