|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Another beautiful poem, Amor! Sheila:)|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|A beautiful Love Offering For Tinka, I bet she is honored to have inspired this beautiful write! SC|
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
|I can barely type my mind is so blown!
|Reviewed by Bryt Eyz (Reader)
|Such sweet words to coax a heart
or perhaps to merely coat it
Simonize her lovely emotions
so smoothly she won't know it
You're a smoosher, a Mr. Slick
a true romantic at heart
You've written well your thoughts
and completely played your part
What love spurns you on
I have to sit and wonder
What doth eat at your soul
what powerful inner hunger?
What e'er it is you call it
All I know is it's a stranger
for when I once gave into it
I knew not of the danger
One man once wrote such things
in perfect rhymed poetry
Expresed eternal devotion
and said he'd always love me
But somehow the journey
from what was and was intended
was twisted and winding
as it led him to what's ended
Now all I've got are dreams
and memories of what could have been
I'm left holding promises
that were never meant to mend
So lucky is this girl
the one to whom you write
Happy she must truly be
to look thus in your sight
Congratulations to her
the one that inspired this poet
Congratulations to you
for knowing that you know it!
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|So good to see you post something again...and as always a most creative and stellar write. You have a true gift!|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by A PAX
I love the last stanza best!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a beautiful and stunning tribute to a very wonderful lady. The use of imagery is at its best. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Amor, This is excellent.
excellent tale and flow.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Absolutely "PERFECTO" Amor!|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Amor, this has got to be the most spectacular thing that I have EVER read.
"quoting the entire poem"
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|...Erato must be proud of this "Daughter of Zeus"
despite the fact that she is taking Erato´s
job... considering that Phoebus is an
admirer of this particular daughter, all
turns back to poetry, and brings me back from the Olympus to say:
I have read a Paean in a Poem dedicated to a deserving and -unique Daughter of THE GREAT POET!
This poem, "Daughter of Zeus" is a collector´s masterpiece.
I Salute the Author of "Daughter of Zeus".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh! my God!!!
I don't believe my eyes!!!
Crying!! Really no jokes I am crying my eyes out!!
Okay let me try again
THANK YOU .....THANK YOU...THANK YOU..
This I do NOT deserve....this is tooo much..
But will except this with great Honor Amor
You made my day........my year....my heaven...to light up with a million bright and beautiful stars......
Let me pinch myself to see if I am not dreaming......no this is for real...
I thank you once again...You are a darling forever in my heart.if thats okay with you?
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was just wonderful, What a beautiful poem for your freind!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow Amor. First, it's wonderful always to see you posting. Second, I love the classical bent of this work, and as usual, you never fail to disappoint. Bravo on a fine work. I love it. Has a calypso rhythm to it.
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Creative genius... Awesome write!|
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|This is a great piece. J.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I call this magnificent and Tinka most fortunate to be named in this poem that approaches perfection!|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
from the Master of
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Amor, this is a very worthy dedication to a lovey Lady. You know what sets your poetry off from most others? It is delivered with great professional class and style. That is great. I can imagine what your journey has been like to arrive at this point in life. But you will still grow and grow. Bill|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I am sure she feels as I do it was worth the wait.|
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Such perfection and eloquence, an excellent tribute...
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Well hi stranger..:)
Haven't seen you in awhile...
Beautiful outstanding write...
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|ahhhh you words are balm
welcome to All of you home
congratulations on your newborn child, I weep tears of happiness for you.......