|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Truly spoken. But some people are very selfish.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|thought provoking write! well done, and well expressed, bhuwan! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Excellent my friend
as usual wonderful words of wisdom
William....peace & love
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Whoa this is heavy... why indeed?
"We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival"
This is SO true..
There's still hope for the future, who knows...
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Bhuwan this is deeper than appears..great messages in this one...we must get along with each other..."we look for company, when we are alone" yes it does get lonely..floria|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so wonderful, these words:
An independent beings
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor
A Truth, that can not be denied.
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|very true no matter how much we think we are independent we are not awesome points made in this one great job on this fantastic poem|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|So much wisdom in your work.A thought provoking piece, Bhuwan.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|How true, I depend on someone to wash his hands after he uses the bathroom and before he makes my taco, he holds my good health in his hands. You are a wise man.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Bhuwan my friend, there so very much insight built into the startling poem. It took me a while to digest it. Well written as always. Bill|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Bhuwan, your perception is wonderful! I enjoy your works.|
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|how true... always making the best sense of all sensibilities...|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hey Bhuwan, You ask some profound questions in this fine write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Yes we are interdependent which should bring us into harmony, but we have yet to become civilized;-)Great write Bhuwan!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|A thoughtful poem and good questions. Well done, Bhuwan.|