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Why Aren't We Independent ?
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We wear cloths
Made by others
We eat food
Produced by others
We live in house
Built by others
We see the same sun
Seen by others
We cherish the same rain
Cherished by others
We breathe the same air
Breathed by others
We seek help
When we’re in trouble
We look for company
When we’re alone
We want love
When our heart is vaccum
Though we stand
On our own foot
Because of others
We are alive
We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival
So, we are not
An independent beings
We are,
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
Those known
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Truly spoken. But some people are very selfish.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
thought provoking write! well done, and well expressed, bhuwan! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Excellent my friend
as usual wonderful words of wisdom

William....peace & love
Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Whoa this is heavy... why indeed?

"We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival"

This is SO true..
There's still hope for the future, who knows...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Bhuwan this is deeper than appears..great messages in this one...we must get along with each other..."we look for company, when we are alone" yes it does get lonely..floria
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was so wonderful, these words:

An independent beings
We are,
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
Those known
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor

A Truth, that can not be denied.


Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
very true no matter how much we think we are independent we are not awesome points made in this one great job on this fantastic poem
Reviewed by Christine Morell
So much wisdom in your work.A thought provoking piece, Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
How true, I depend on someone to wash his hands after he uses the bathroom and before he makes my taco, he holds my good health in his hands. You are a wise man.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Bhuwan my friend, there so very much insight built into the startling poem. It took me a while to digest it. Well written as always. Bill
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Bhuwan, your perception is wonderful! I enjoy your works.
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
how true... always making the best sense of all sensibilities...
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Hey Bhuwan, You ask some profound questions in this fine write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Yes we are interdependent which should bring us into harmony, but we have yet to become civilized;-)Great write Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
A thoughtful poem and good questions. Well done, Bhuwan.

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