Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!


Featured Authors:  Philip Hughes-Luing, iMiller Caldwell, iFumiko Takahashi, iRobert Mills, iChrisTopher Stone, iRichard French, iJay Onwukwe, i

  Home > Mainstream > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Bhuwan Thapaliya

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· Messages
· 691 Titles
· 10,010 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
Member Since: May, 2004

Bhuwan Thapaliya, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Books by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Why Aren't We Independent ?
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Bhuwan Thapaliya
•  a poet
•  Favor
•  He heard the music
•  Darkness
•  Faded roses
           >> View all 680

We wear cloths
Made by others
We eat food
Produced by others
We live in house
Built by others
We see the same sun
Seen by others
We cherish the same rain
Cherished by others
We breathe the same air
Breathed by others
We seek help
When we’re in trouble
We look for company
When we’re alone
We want love
When our heart is vaccum
Though we stand
On our own foot
Because of others
We are alive
We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival
So, we are not
An independent beings
We are,
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
Those known
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!

Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/26/2003
Truly spoken. But some people are very selfish.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/25/2003
thought provoking write! well done, and well expressed, bhuwan! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/25/2003
Excellent my friend
as usual wonderful words of wisdom

William....peace & love
Reviewed by Digital Fairy 4/25/2003
Whoa this is heavy... why indeed?

"We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival"

This is SO true..
There's still hope for the future, who knows...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 4/25/2003
Bhuwan this is deeper than appears..great messages in this one...we must get along with each other..."we look for company, when we are alone" yes it does get lonely..floria
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/25/2003
This was so wonderful, these words:

An independent beings
We are,
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
Those known
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor

A Truth, that can not be denied.


Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 4/25/2003
very true no matter how much we think we are independent we are not awesome points made in this one great job on this fantastic poem
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/25/2003
So much wisdom in your work.A thought provoking piece, Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/25/2003
How true, I depend on someone to wash his hands after he uses the bathroom and before he makes my taco, he holds my good health in his hands. You are a wise man.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 4/24/2003
Bhuwan my friend, there so very much insight built into the startling poem. It took me a while to digest it. Well written as always. Bill
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 4/24/2003
Bhuwan, your perception is wonderful! I enjoy your works.
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza 4/24/2003
how true... always making the best sense of all sensibilities...
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/24/2003
Hey Bhuwan, You ask some profound questions in this fine write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/24/2003
Yes we are interdependent which should bring us into harmony, but we have yet to become civilized;-)Great write Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/24/2003
A thoughtful poem and good questions. Well done, Bhuwan.

Petoskey Stones by Lois Santalo

In the second and third generation of women who grew up in the house called Stormland, there is much dysfunction. Rebellious Della Eloise, or Weezy, the grandchild of young Edgar,..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.