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Cast Ashore
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Friday, April 25, 2003

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Sea winds bellow,
Cast me ashore,
Scales reflect the moon,
Gills burst under the sun,
I am shattered against the rocks,
Clicking claws scuttle forward,
To pick the meat,
From my bones…

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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/27/2003
so many images I saw in this one.
it roared like the ocean
Reviewed by Netta Jack 4/26/2003
This is so deep. I had to read it a couple of times to get all the aspects of this write. Excellent job!!!!
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 4/26/2003
Reindeer, this precious poem speaks volumes! Great job.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 4/26/2003
Very touching, Retta.

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/26/2003
shame this sounds like my "Gulloyster Seagull"

Very chilled write dear Retta!!
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 4/26/2003
Chills... I can see his in my minds eye.. Can't get better !! Congrats on this write.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 4/26/2003
It speaks volumes....
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 4/26/2003
what a great write...short but to the n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/26/2003
Fantastic terse poem Reindeer...has the power of an atom!
Reviewed by jude forese 4/26/2003
for a mini-poem, it says mouthfuls...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 4/26/2003
Short but powerful..
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 4/25/2003
A bear is hungry?
Great piece of work.....
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/25/2003
Dear Retta, first of all, i am sorry i have not been a reviwer. I really have been ver ill. I feel better now, even after reading your dark poetry. Simply written you are the best!

love yf
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/25/2003
Kool cute oceanic write
short and excellent

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/25/2003
Oh Reindeer, the imagery and verbage is outstanding.
par excellence
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/25/2003
OH yeah..definitely relationships..

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/25/2003
Ohhhh Noooo. Say it ain't soooooooo.
Short and horror...and you have it under 'relationships'.....gawd. hahahahah.
Bravo. [I think...]
Reviewed by Rodney Bohen 4/25/2003
Clicking claws scuttle forward,

Grand line! Outstanding...
I liked!
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