|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Funny, but that's all we got, flip flop!!!!!|
|Reviewed by jing javier
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|You have such a way with words Ron....love this and the artwork!|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|This perfect poem deserves a big
Hope all is well in your corner of the world.
your fan and friend
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Hee Hee . you, this is great. lol
Love, JC xoxoxo
PS. are we all washed up? ;)
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|God, this place wouldn't be the same without a sketchman to give me a belly laugh everytime..he he he he..Love you..|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
I enjoyed this piece and the art
Many Blessings friend~*
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Way to go ........excellent poetry you write looking forward to reading more for sure|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|i will live life with all i've got...me, too LOL well done! :) excellent poem, even better advice all of us can use...and that pic LOL you are too much, my friend...love and (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Uh-oh! Looks like that inmate is gonna spend some time in solitary!
This one made me laugh...thanks!
|Reviewed by Shelley Moss
|LOL! What a delightful read Ron! I am so glad I came across your writing. I will be going to your personal website to check out your work there. I'd love a visit from you and an honest review would be wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Oh this is priceless! Brightened my day at work :)
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|The last line...that's what youre supposed to do
Great poem and art
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Ron, you crack me up! Great art. ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Should mop the floor...
Cute pic and enjoyed the poem.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
|lol Good one Ron ... nice morning laugh. Hope all is well with you ... Shar|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so funny! I liked this one!
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Thanks for the laugh!|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Thanks for the laugh Ron.
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Insanity must run in the Axelson line...I know...I'm one...lol...this is hysterical..thanks for the laugh and the diversion from feeling dead on my feet from waitressing.........seven days a WEEK!!!!! My life really is a MOP!!! cous...|
|Reviewed by A PAX
I once heard a commedian on the radio say...Thats the way the mop, flops!!! And it has stuck in my mind for years, and I always thought I would write a poem for that little line.....but you beat me too it!! This is adorable....
maybe I should use that mop to clean out this ole brain!
ty for this one!!!
I likessssssssss it!
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Great Ron :-) :-)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|sketchman, you are a hoot! this write is a laugh riot! HA! :) love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) *p.s.: the pic is on its way; be on the lookout for it! :)*|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Hahahahaha Ron dear man...I needed this today....was feeling down...and oh gosh dont have much time on here but saw your name...I knew it would be worth it...so funny....and I love the pic....Ron thank you so much for the sketch.....you are so very talented...Floria|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|That mop can help you make it to the top!!... IF you remember what the mop is for... Great write!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Nothing a little bit of elbow grease wouldn't fix :-) Great write! and I enjoyed the fresh thought.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|amazing what a little cleaning up will do ;)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Roniemop you ain't no flop just say the word for you I will chop...chop;-)hehehe excellent sketch and verse...|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Nice picture, nice poem. Good luck with your clean up job!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey this is now called
At its best
I like the action of the mop
It cleans my kitchen floor
And whipe my troubles out the door
because the dog shit on my floor
You have done a great job with the mop Ron
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|Oh Ron this is so great. We all get the wake-up call to live our lives. It's our survival instints cause we know we will die. Then, this life is over.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Kool write RON
like the picture that goes with it
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Poor baby. Live life with all you got, sounds like a splendid plan to me. I'll go for that...art is a scream.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Hurray! See how smart I am? I knew you could send me off to sleep with a grin.. Jaysus, Ron.. this is hilarious.. I love the way your wrote it.. one rhyme after another.. Pssst: yeah, and I love that guys' pink shoes! That's when I nearly fell off my chair! This is just a riot! hehe katy.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Love the art
and the poem was perfect for this one.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Long as It takes You to Mop It Up,i.e. If You Get Up One more Time After You Fall You (as I) Will Make It!