|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|was rambling about in here tonigh and ran across this earlier verse of yours...am glad I discovered it. The rhythm and flow of this piece is excellent and the message...it too is excellent and woe unto the man who does not heed the warnings!|
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Thanks for your reviews!
I enjoyed this poem a lot, especially this imagery, which is reinforced by the strong alliteration of these lines:
Bye for now!
Richard Vallance (Janke)
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Enjoyed the staccato rhythms and the "come get me if you dare" attitude.
But if you want to play with fire my sun sign is Leo, with Saggitarius rising and Aries in my moon sign. So how about a slice of chocolate cheesecake.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was great..I loved your strength in this poem,
|Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski
|Sure you could not use a little temptation ? ;)|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|This was great !|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Strong powerful one..
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Reviewed by Betty Rickard
Excellent write..Love it..
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|A beautiful poem, Gwen but a little frieghtening for any suitor:) :)
Love form India - Joel -
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
love the warnings
smooth and stealthy rhythm
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Wonderful write. I especially like that you mention you are happy already.
So you have something to offer besides need.
To be full of life so that we seek to share the gifts...not be them.
But then, in sharing...the bond becomes the ultimate gift, still only borrowed...but creating us.
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Sounds very interesting, Gwen. Are you taking applications? Excellent write, dear.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|excellent write...mesmerizing....love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|wonderful verse Gwen;-) I too would like to know how that works...hahaha|
|Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe
|That's telling it like it is. Excellent verse.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|wooooooooo. You must tell me how this works out. [smiles] Nicely done, Gwen|