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Beware, My Would Be Lover
by Gwen Dickerson

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Beware,
my would be lover!
Your
thoughtforms
commune with me!

Telling me
of your
love
and obsessive
fantasy!

Beware
tempt me not!
lest, you
weaken
my defenses!

lest,
I divert
an intense
focus
toward thee!

Are you strong?
Determined?
Still want
to persue?
Must have me?

Yet, I have no need
to depend on thee
to make me happy!
This,
I am already!

So, Beware,
my would be lover!
You might never want
another, were you,
to capture me!

Copyright(2003)by Gwen Dickerson


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Reviewed by E. Richardson 5/19/2007
was rambling about in here tonigh and ran across this earlier verse of yours...am glad I discovered it. The rhythm and flow of this piece is excellent and the message...it too is excellent and woe unto the man who does not heed the warnings!
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) 7/23/2003
Hi, Gwen!

Thanks for your reviews!

I enjoyed this poem a lot, especially this imagery, which is reinforced by the strong alliteration of these lines:

lest,
I divert
an intense
focus
toward thee!

Bye for now!

Richard Vallance (Janke)
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada



Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 5/5/2003
Enjoyed the staccato rhythms and the "come get me if you dare" attitude.
But if you want to play with fire my sun sign is Leo, with Saggitarius rising and Aries in my moon sign. So how about a slice of chocolate cheesecake.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/29/2003
This was great..I loved your strength in this poem,

just excellent!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski 4/26/2003
Sure you could not use a little temptation ? ;)
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 4/26/2003
This was great !
Reviewed by Trixie Love 4/26/2003
Hi Gwen,
Strong powerful one..
Love it....

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Dale Clark 4/26/2003
Super write!
Reviewed by Betty Rickard 4/26/2003
Gwen,
Excellent write..Love it..
Hugs,
Be blessed,
Betty
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 4/26/2003
A beautiful poem, Gwen but a little frieghtening for any suitor:) :)

Love form India - Joel -
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/26/2003
Gwen
Excellent write,
love the warnings
smooth and stealthy rhythm

William
Reviewed by John Bidwell 4/26/2003
Wonderful write. I especially like that you mention you are happy already.
So you have something to offer besides need.
To be full of life so that we seek to share the gifts...not be them.
But then, in sharing...the bond becomes the ultimate gift, still only borrowed...but creating us.
Blessings,
John
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/26/2003
Sounds very interesting, Gwen. Are you taking applications? Excellent write, dear.


yf
tony
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 4/26/2003
excellent write...mesmerizing....love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/26/2003
wonderful verse Gwen;-) I too would like to know how that works...hahaha
Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe 4/26/2003
That's telling it like it is. Excellent verse.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/25/2003
wooooooooo. You must tell me how this works out. [smiles] Nicely done, Gwen

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