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When monkey became man
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Saturday, April 26, 2003

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The world headed
Towards the light
When monkey became man
Few thousand years ago
But now the world
Is heading towards the doom
Since man is metamorphosing
Back into monkey nowadays

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by jude forese 4/26/2003
so true.... yet there are those who are evolving into a new and more elevated species...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/26/2003
This was great..I loved what you had to say here so much!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/26/2003
LOL but i ain't related to no monkey! *scratchin' my underarm* dang flea LOL you're right, humans act worse than monkeys sometimes...thought provoking and slaps ya upside the head...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/26/2003
And some of us are still swinging in the trees. [smiles] Well done.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 4/26/2003
I don't know what the heck is wrong with mankind! It must be something in our food, air or water! Or maybe we're contacted a dehumanizing virus type that causes our brains to deteriorate! Whoa, is man! Nice poem, friend.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/26/2003
Excellent my friend,
words of wisdom

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/26/2003
this was short and hit me with a big laugh. YOu're right, some people act worst than monkeys.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/26/2003
very true yes!!
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 4/26/2003
Primates evolved into existence 34 million years ago and continue to live today, more evolved that when they first appeared. Humans evolved into existence 5 million years ago. When compared with other living things on earth we can see that is not a very long time. So we can assume from this that we are still evolving. Unfortunately as humans we are impatient.

Your poem is very good, it should get people thinking.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/26/2003
Oh so true. Profound thinking, Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/26/2003
Hey Bhuwan, I see you believe in Darwins therory. Thought Provoking write my friend.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory 4/26/2003
Seems we are acting more like our primate friends than civilized humans.. Sometimes I think the monkeys are more civilized than we are.. Enjoyed this .. in your face .. truth packed piece.
P.S. The art cracks me
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