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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/26/2003 |
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| so true.... yet there are those who are evolving into a new and more elevated species... |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/26/2003 |
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This was great..I loved what you had to say here so much!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/26/2003 |
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| LOL but i ain't related to no monkey! *scratchin' my underarm* dang flea LOL you're right, humans act worse than monkeys sometimes...thought provoking and slaps ya upside the head...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/26/2003 |
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| And some of us are still swinging in the trees. [smiles] Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
4/26/2003 |
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| I don't know what the heck is wrong with mankind! It must be something in our food, air or water! Or maybe we're contacted a dehumanizing virus type that causes our brains to deteriorate! Whoa, is man! Nice poem, friend. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/26/2003 |
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Excellent my friend,
words of wisdom
William |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/26/2003 |
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| this was short and hit me with a big laugh. YOu're right, some people act worst than monkeys. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/26/2003 |
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| very true yes!! |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
4/26/2003 |
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Primates evolved into existence 34 million years ago and continue to live today, more evolved that when they first appeared. Humans evolved into existence 5 million years ago. When compared with other living things on earth we can see that is not a very long time. So we can assume from this that we are still evolving. Unfortunately as humans we are impatient.
Your poem is very good, it should get people thinking. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/26/2003 |
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Oh so true. Profound thinking, Bhuwan.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
4/26/2003 |
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Hey Bhuwan, I see you believe in Darwins therory. Thought Provoking write my friend.
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tony |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
4/26/2003 |
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Seems we are acting more like our primate friends than civilized humans.. Sometimes I think the monkeys are more civilized than we are.. Enjoyed this .. in your face .. truth packed piece.
P.S. The art cracks me up..lol |
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