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What If...
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Saturday, April 26, 2003

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What if…

I was a quasar,
and saw in liquid light?
Planets and moons
would be oblique,
blackened depths
of void could be
the unbound death
of shadows known
only to movements of me…

What if…

I was a black hole,
and felt pain from rabid light?
Sunny stars and
might slash and scar,
undark could show
the woeful wounds
of colors bright,
painfully undoing me...

What if…

I was the moon above,
impacted by others light?
Craters and shoals
of loneliness,
burnt into my frame,
my mind aghast at
damages, inflicted by
my kind, shattered and
battered by shades of me…

What if…

I was never conceived,
no glimmer of anyone’s light?
Hollows and goals
of being alive,
unwound yet staying tight,
my soul, alone in
emptiness, shallow and
sublimed, gathered into
nothingness, no Time for being me…

Erin Moen

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Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister 4/30/2003
What if...? Good point, good writing.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 4/27/2003
Bravo Erin!! I loved your comment to me, and am so glad I came here to read this! We are on the same wavelength...I like that! Very, very cool!


P.S. I missed you too!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 4/27/2003
Parish the thought of your 'nonexistence'.. thank god for my ability to read you! Tis so true that you write provocative and brilliant thoughts... but YOU, the writer, are a bloody miracle... I simply bask in your creativity.. one helluva poet, you are, Erin! Yep! katy.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 4/27/2003
You Erin are not only a good poet and this is a good poem, but also a deep thinker. Very deep. Bill
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 4/27/2003
What if ... indeed. Outstanding! ~Joseph
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/27/2003
A superb, profound piece, Erin.
Reviewed by richard poor 4/27/2003
yea,very good!!!
Reviewed by jude forese 4/27/2003
i really like how you've probed into the concepts of being... well done!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/27/2003
What if you let me write the next NO 1..

This is sooo filled with imagery....

Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/27/2003
Good Morning,Erin
I think we would be neighbors in never never land. I love this subject. I love your writings. I love that you are my Arizona sister.

love yf
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/26/2003
Deep excellent write
with great imagery

Reviewed by Darlene Caban 4/26/2003
That question has always bothered me-- how can we even imagine what it would be like not to exist... do we have a memory of not existing? Great poem... now I'll be up all night, thanks a bunch! ;)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/26/2003
This was so lovely, and moving, I love your imagery here..

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/26/2003
excellent images and verses in this one.
You get better and better
Reviewed by J. Murphy 4/26/2003
This is great. The last question is a good one. J.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/26/2003
What if ? Create your own reality. This has wonderful imagery. Bravo.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/26/2003
fantasic imagery as always do metaphysical incredibly well!
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