|Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader)
|ur so gud at this|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Nice rhyme and meter and well expressed thoughts. I'm human ... so I do get sad and I do feel pain and that makes me real, and that's okay. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Jamez Michael
|this is wicked!
good one tracle :-)
|Reviewed by Dan
|all from 1 line? Strnage but yet amazing|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|EXCELLANT WRITE...says it all!!!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is stunning work
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|You're Charley, and you are a goooooooood poet. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Wow! I love the rhyme in this. It honestly flows off the page and off your tongue! Brilliant. I like the humbleness yet confidence in this poem of yourself. I especially adore the last stanza. I may be wrong, but I think a lot of girls our age feel like that, well, at least I know I do! I don't show myself clearly to many... if any, people. Brilliant write. Look forward to many more... if they can top this!
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|You're Charley, and I'm glad you are.
As a poem, this had great meter, Charley. Well done. As far as you go... you are a light in this Den; we are lucky to have you.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Dr X
|Wow! This is unbelievable charl, I don't know if everyone else will think the same thing, but this poem really does say everything. This is undoubtedly the best you've ever written, there's no topping this.|