|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This will speak in the face/soul of all who are honest with themselves, Netta. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
profound, stirring, brilliant write--well done *applause*
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|this was outstanding. i think we all face something similar in our life times. you put it in words. gem|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Netta, this is fantastic. Wow! Great to have you here. Tis is astounding work. Very talented. Your question on how to do embed. If you send me something you want to set to music and color, just email me what you want and I will do one for you and then email it back and all you will need do is copy and paste it. Ok bill at: kojak240.msn.com|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was great! I loved this one so much,
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Moving,thrilling,makes ones wheels turn in thought !|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|I agree with Nicole here...this is a magnificent poem. I want to read more of yours .
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A wonderful write Netta
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|ABSOLUTELY ASTOUNDING, THOUGHT PROVOKING, TRUTHFUL and POIGNANT WRITE...WOW!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|strange what we can learn from ourselves...
|Reviewed by richard poor
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Oh Netta, Such a beautiuful write...
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|Deep, profound, emotional and thought provoking. My favorite verses are:
I looked into
The eyes of Time
And saw Destiny
He scared me
He extended his hand
Reaching for mine
Panic had me frozen
Intrigue made me open
All the locks
On all the doors
That existed on all the walls
I had built for my protection
The only thing scarier
Than the unknown
Is getting to know it
Ain't that the truth?
Netta, you left me hanging wanting for more. Great job.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Splendid write Netta!beautifully expressed!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...I looked into
The eyes of Time
And saw Destiny..."
Every line from beginning to end rings with truth. Bravo, Netta, sweetie.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|"Today I am teachable" - Good write!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Netta, this one is very good.
"Then Destiny whispered
"Continue with life
And go left
With Faithful and True"
I tightened my grip
On the hand that held mine
"Today, I am teachable"
I was smiling "