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Inner Shrieks
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Dedicated to my sister-in-law, Fran, and to my brother, Jeff.


The inner shrieks
of disbelief echo bulgingly,
and pounds stability with jagged sharpness,
genes gone wild, cancer,
Life-sucker and family destroyer,
has usurped a fragile chemistry,
a healthy body, a human mind…
Fear, anger, grief, outrage,
and, always, more fear,
miasmically suffocating

The tears flow,
and saltiness burns into minds
wounded countenance, crusting
the edges of despair, cancer,
Spirit-sapper and widow maker,
has infiltrated a precious person,
my brother’s wife, his Joy of Life…
Terror, fear, horrendous ripping
of hearts foundation,
cataclysmically changing

Her spirit glows,
and her courage shines into designs
of the chemical battle, raising
her extended family’s hope, cancer,
Pain-giver and energy-ender,
has transfixed her soul, and ours,
she holds our hearts, thoughts, and love…
Agony, nausea and wanton fears
are bravely overridden,
somehow reclaiming

in tears.

Erin Moen
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
This one, this poem that is almost a shriek of frustration, took a lot of guts to write. You revealed some pain and unpleasantry, but did so in a stylish courageous way. I can relate to these emotions, to the sadness and the anger, and you have given it excellent voice! Good for you! A great write!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Powerful, and such a journey you have taken me on with your incredible poetry,
I am awed by your courage and strength portrayed in this excellent poem,

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Powerful use of words!!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
These words sucker punched me. Good job with these words girly! Teresa
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Erin, This is an outstanding, heartfelt, sad, and powerful write. We have had to deal with this terrible disease in my family. May God grant you all strength, courage, and healing. ~Joseph
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
outstanding write, erin! your sister-in-law is in my thoughts and prayers! :( (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
So sad!

I am floored by the power in your words Erin....My God Girl!!

My best to your family.......Dani
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Good Morning, Erin
You distinguish yourself so well in this writing. I am happy you are my neighbor.

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
That's is - "cataclysmically changing
normalcy." Positive thoughts going ou to your sister-in-law, Erin.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
superb write!!
Reviewed by William Bonilla
wonderful write Erin

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Erin, The power of your words is outstanding, but the power of His love is Awesome.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
I hope she makes it. The chemical battle is NO fun.
Reviewed by Misty Lackey (Reader)
nice work, and I love the flow of words.
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
just beautiful.
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