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|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|I like this, Richard. Beautiful. Hauntingly reminiscent of two lines of my own:
"And I will live my life on earth
Without concern for eternity berth."
|Reviewed by serenety L
|I found that one by chance and must tell you how much I love it. This poem reflects my deeptest emotions. Very good write. Love. S.|
|Reviewed by Amy Hawke
|this is wonderful Richard.. so insightful and true. I'm there... and will always be... as I know you will for me|
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|oh! yes, agreed, soooo good and wow, just so beautifully done, your SELF in words...
"that in this uncertain saddness
how the thoughts so twist
in a sublime gentle maddness
that life is not to just exist,
but to be fought and dared
every minute,hour, and day
to be lived as if not cared
what more can i say... "
deeply thoughtful and powerfully real!
|Reviewed by Mary Cannon
|Very good reading here, enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This is now my favorite of yours! Very, very good write!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|outstanding write, richard! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Deep thoughtful moody write......excellently done|
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Nicely done :)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth
|You are in a deep, deep mood with this one, Richard. Well done.|