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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/29/2003 |
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| very good! enjoyed reading... |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
4/29/2003 |
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| Eat away Tony! Eat. Have you ever seen that Campbell's Soup cook book called "A Man, A Can & A Plan"??? LOL....cute Tony. Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
4/29/2003 |
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| Tony....very very good write...superb!!! |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
4/28/2003 |
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Tony, I'll send you my favorite cook book. No one should have to suffer through a tuna cassarole.
Love the playful way you did this.
sorry I've missed a few days but been working on the poetry manuscript, now all I need is a publisher. And then had to get ready for class tonight, students don't want to hear, "I was too busy with other stuff to think about you."
Keep in touch.
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
4/28/2003 |
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| this is really good Tony! |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
4/28/2003 |
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I envy your savvy and quick learning abilities! For this reason you've become the accomplished writer that you stand to be. Good job and many more good lessons with your new teacher ;)
Warm Love
*-Brittany-* |
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| Reviewed by Bill Murray |
4/28/2003 |
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SO YOU THINK THIS POEM IS GARBAGE HUG TONY!!!!
+Amatory Dance+
Murmuring incantations
to the rising sun
they shared the
wakeful moments,
Excitation Heightened
by stars bursting
forth in their minds,
Passion anointing
expectant hearts
with desire.
Mouth on breast
nurtured self
with atoms of
vitality,
Fingers explored
life's inner cavern,
They reeled in unison,
drinking of each other,
Until spent by
mutual intoxication,
paused to regroup
their senses.
Then, thighs
trembling with
rhythmic
bursts of energy
generated
moans and cries,
While hunger's
devouring tongue
searched out
secret wounds of
of rejuvenation,
And bodies taut with
spring like rigidity
fused together,
As the sun settled
beyond the horizon,
And the moon
rose blood red
before their eyes.
(c) Bill Murray
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/28/2003 |
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Tony I like the ryhme... You learn fast
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/28/2003 |
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great write TONY
Well they say fish is good for your "drive"
maybe thats what the tuna is all about.
excellent
William |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/28/2003 |
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| Cute...except beat is beet. Unless you beat your meat of course. Oh dear. That didn't come out right. |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
4/28/2003 |
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| I agree with nancy..he he |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
4/28/2003 |
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Skip the tuna and go for the fun, great write Tony.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
4/28/2003 |
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Loved this write..
Made me smile,
my friend.
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/28/2003 |
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| such humour Tony;-) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/28/2003 |
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This was so funny! Excellent!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/28/2003 |
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| lol very cute! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/28/2003 |
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I did not no tuna was the best........I thought oysters was THE best!!
Go feed the felines NOW!!
Love
Tinka
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
4/28/2003 |
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| well I'm not crazy about tuna casserole myself,,but you best keep that girl happy! This is a good write,,,Lisa |
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