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reprieve *fiction*
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, April 29, 2003

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VERSE ONE
the air is sticky and so slow so slow
humidity presses down presses down
its gettin hard to breathe oh dont you know
its fixin to come some rain gon to drown

VERSE TWO
its not just the storm gon get me get me
gon drink my troubles away far away
dont care if the storm leaves me in debris
my hearts breakin apart this cloudy day

REFRAIN
bills wife leavin laid off what else what else
everthins piled top my head my head
im just a dangfool ashamed of myself
it might be better off if i was dead

VERSE THREE
hurricanes comin oh so fast so fast
the wind risin waves crash crash on the shore
i dont know how much longer i can last
waters comin in underneath my door

BRIDGE
dont wanna die in this watery grave
but my broken heart cant see no way out
how i wish i were courageous and brave
instead im a coward i have no doubt

REFRAIN
bills wife leavin laid off what else what else
everthins piled top my head my head
im just a dangfool ashamed of myself
it might be better off if i was dead

VERSE FOUR
wake up see an angel of light of light
seems ive been given a reprieve reprieve
God saved me in me He saw somethin bright
through all my troubles He aint gonna leave

SECOND REFRAIN
through all my troubles Hes there oh Hes there
He aint never gon leave my side my side
all i have to do is call out in prayer
Hes my refuge in Jesus i can hide

REPEAT SECOND REFRAIN

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all i have to do is call out in prayer
Hes my refuge in Jesus i can hide

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*Reviewed by OnepoetGem the Poetic Rapper**	5/5/2003

Very interesting karla. Honest expression in your own way.




Reviewed by A PAX	4/30/2003

This is wonderful!!! Does it have a melody yet!!! wow




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	4/29/2003

Wonderful tune it could be.. I need your e mail sketch is done sketch.arkansas.net




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/29/2003

you and Karen must do a duet, put it on a wav and upload like I do;-)sounds like a good one to me!




Reviewed by Dove (Reader)	4/29/2003

Yes, could definetly be a song..It shows talent..Wonderful sweet{{{{ Karla}}}}Please ask your sis to stay at the poetry site..I will miss her toooooooo much if she goes..(sad)..




Reviewed by Tony Nerone	4/29/2003

Now Ms.Karla I would love to hear you sing this marvelous write.:) tony




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	4/29/2003

This is excellent.... Could be a song.... Peggy




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	4/29/2003

This was excellent, I loved these poem so much, very inspiring! Reindeer




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	4/29/2003

awesome write! loved the last few verses! powerful! ((((HUGS))))

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