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Band Of Gold by Trixie Love Wednesday, April 30, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan .
~ Band Of Gold ~ ~~~~~~~~~ Oh how well I remember Our wedding day, Tears were in our eyes As you slipped on my Finger a band of gold. ~~ Precious vows we so Lovingly made, Promising to forever Love and behold... ~~ You made a vow that Never would you cheat. That forever I would Be Your only one... ~~ Oneday you decided that You wanted to be free. Feeling so shattered Didn't know how I would Ever move on. ~~ For you turned my world Totally up side down. As you said a new love You had found... ~~ Shattered were all of My hopes and dreams. For together I thought We would grow old. ~~ I broke down and cried As I took off my ring. Now within my treasure box Sits the band of gold... ~~~~~~~~~*~ By: Trixie Love (c) 2003
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Reviewed by Aidan S. Graham	4/30/2003

Trixie: Greive not, for the treasure box I am sure holds lots of precious jewels that will allow your eyes to shine once again. Focus on them and your faith. Aidan




Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen	4/30/2003

Betrayal of the first degree... Excellent write, Trixie.




Reviewed by J John (Reader)	4/30/2003

:(( well penned .. J & J




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/30/2003

Such beautiful words with such deeply hurt feelings, life can be so unfair...love you Trixie;-)




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	4/30/2003

sad and yet so beautiful




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	4/30/2003

so sad, but a beautiful write, trixie! well done! :( (((HUGS)))




Reviewed by Marilyn Seray	4/30/2003

I can "hear" between the lines the emotional pain.




Reviewed by Paul Berube	4/30/2003

Trixie, heartfelt moment.




Reviewed by Digital Fairy	4/30/2003

Yikes...this made my eyes tear up... Stunningly sad and yet so beautiful.. :) --Karissa