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12/31/01
by Rick B Baber

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I woke up this morning, thinking about you.
Where have you gone?
How have you been?
I miss your eyes.
So bright.
So clear.
So full of hope and anticipation.
Your energy.
You were going to conquer the world.
Remember?
I try to recall the last time I saw you.
Itís been so long.
So much has happened.
Was it one of the times
You carried another friend to rest?
Or that moment you witnessed the first breath
Of your own legacy?
We must have been having fun in those days.
But like the man says,
If you remember, you werenít there.
One day
I looked around and you were gone.
And that never really occurred to me
Until this morning.
And I missed you.
Then I wiped away the sleep and the fog,
And for just a second,
I thought I caught a glimpse of you,
Looking back at me.
Youíre still in there.
Somewhere.



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Reviewed by Joyce Rapier 1/13/2003
I feel the pain as I remember and reflect on losing my first grandchild. "One day I looked around and you were gone." Beautiful and heartwarming.

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Reviewed by tinka 10/26/2002
this was heartwarming ......now one knows better what it feels like to look back and the person is gone forever......like in losing a child....looking back will never bring her back......no matter what
Reviewed by Cles Wilson 10/22/2002
Excellent
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 7/28/2002
This is really special..I feel so much heart and soul in these words. I remember you from WBM...Thanks, Dani ;) (aka buff-beauty)
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 6/22/2002
Beautiful ... beautiful ... beautiful
Reviewed by Amy Peterson (Reader) 3/26/2002
Minerva indeed. Have I read this before? I loved it, and I almost cried, and not from the pain of a turtle biting my...
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 3/25/2002
Excellent writing~
Reviewed by Wendi 3/20/2002
I particularly like this line: "I looked around and you were gone.
And that never really occurred to me
Until this morning," although I enjoyed the entire piece. Every once in a while, ya run across a piece of writing that has a pulse of its own -- this is one of them.
Reviewed by Claywoman 1/10/2002
This made me want to cry, Minerva said it all the ending is the beginning of it all...
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 12/31/2001
Beautiful! This reminds me of the song 'I know you're out there somewhere' by the Moody Blues. Happy New Year Rick! Janet

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