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|Reviewed by Joyce Rapier
|I feel the pain as I remember and reflect on losing my first grandchild. "One day I looked around and you were gone." Beautiful and heartwarming.
|Reviewed by tinka
|this was heartwarming ......now one knows better what it feels like to look back and the person is gone forever......like in losing a child....looking back will never bring her back......no matter what|
|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|This is really special..I feel so much heart and soul in these words. I remember you from WBM...Thanks, Dani ;) (aka buff-beauty)|
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Beautiful ... beautiful ... beautiful|
|Reviewed by Amy Peterson (Reader)
|Minerva indeed. Have I read this before? I loved it, and I almost cried, and not from the pain of a turtle biting my...|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Reviewed by Wendi
|I particularly like this line: "I looked around and you were gone.
And that never really occurred to me
Until this morning," although I enjoyed the entire piece. Every once in a while, ya run across a piece of writing that has a pulse of its own -- this is one of them.
|Reviewed by Claywoman
|This made me want to cry, Minerva said it all the ending is the beginning of it all...|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Beautiful! This reminds me of the song 'I know you're out there somewhere' by the Moody Blues. Happy New Year Rick! Janet|