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The Death Of Love by Candida L Eittreim Thursday, May 01, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan

Where once love lived, there is only disdain… Why? How did you change so my love? Cruel casual words Flung across the room with pantherine savagery, Strike my hurt benumbed soul with their ripping talons. Treasured love secrets dismissed With callous indifference, The secret code of two hearts used Trampled by the crass Sweet precious moments, denied by a swift backhand across my heart How could you? Where did you go, to change so utterly? Once a warm and loving man. You are now a stranger robed in icy armour, Lies spilling easily, scarlet with my blood We sit silently... Two civil strangers In a cold empty room Once graced with love Two small tears escape my aching heart As I gaze with love and loss At once was…… My body empty of your presence.. forever

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Reviewed by haim kadman	12/5/2007

"Treasured love secrets dismissed With callous indifference..." A beautiful veil of sadness that strikes straight to one's heart like a sharp dagger - to the hilt.




Reviewed by Michael Emery (Reader)	6/5/2003

I never realised your skills, the pain you evoked with these words.....Mike




Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister	5/26/2003

why do we stay? The hope of it getting better keeps us holding on but the hoep surly will fade and what then? honest truths you have written Mister




Reviewed by The Gentle Man	5/26/2003

Gripping in it's intensity......so very sad when love dies....you said it well Candida




*Reviewed by Joseph OneLight®*	5/6/2003

How, indeed, does love ever die if it once lived? Much sorrow felt. ~Joseph




Reviewed by Ami McDermond (Reader)	5/1/2003

This poem is both painful to read yet beautiful at the same time. You're quite gifted at expressing human emotion. Devoirs, Ami