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|Reviewed by haim kadman
|"Treasured love secrets dismissed
With callous indifference..."
A beautiful veil of sadness that strikes straight to one's heart like a sharp dagger - to the hilt.
|Reviewed by Michael Emery (Reader)
|I never realised your skills, the pain you evoked with these words.....Mike|
|Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister
|why do we stay? The hope of it getting better keeps us holding on but the hoep surly will fade and what then?
honest truths you have written
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|Gripping in it's intensity......so very sad when love dies....you said it well Candida|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|How, indeed, does love ever die if it once lived? Much sorrow felt. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Ami McDermond (Reader)
|This poem is both painful to read yet beautiful at the same time. You're quite gifted at expressing human emotion.