|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Most excellent writing again!
Your work is deeply spirtual in its depth of feeling!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Such beautiful expression here, I liked this so very much,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Slightly sad but very well expressed, hope for a good ending. GEM|
|Reviewed by Lorrieann Russell
|Vivid conveyance of emotion. Leaves no doubt the lady is heartsick. Lovely form, and flow. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Oooh this is sad left me without words|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|Oh Candy, Deep sadness in this piece. Sending warm thoughts and gentle hugs.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|once the ashes of love are blown clear by the winds of life, it's time to move on...|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|You dug deep for this one Candy...excellent write...Z|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Candida such poetically well written sorrow and pain vividly described within your poetic words...BEAUTIFUL!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This one is so touching in emotions and the ending outstanding.
"She knows deep in the marrow of her bones
He is gone
Leaving a trail of ashes
Where once love grew "