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| Reviewed by David Mohd |
5/6/2003 |
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| Rain and hope,Love and lost,u r using the words in a rythemic style.well done Mae. |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
5/5/2003 |
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| yea, i gotta read more of you too.... |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
5/5/2003 |
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| Welcome to the Den ... what a nice way to start! ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/4/2003 |
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Your doing a lot of thinking
in this one
Don't wait too long
Welcome again to the den....... |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/4/2003 |
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| Very good. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
5/4/2003 |
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| What a quiet, introspective voice you have.. How nice to have you to read in the Den.. this is lyrical and lovely. katy. |
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
5/4/2003 |
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I love the way your mind thinks and the expression you leave behind.
Welcome to the Den!
Dee |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
5/4/2003 |
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| You write deep and inspired. Love this poem and its meaning. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/3/2003 |
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My oh my Mae what a deep profound inspiring mind you have! Welcome to the den!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/3/2003 |
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many things that are hidden have more effect on us than that which is in the open go with the flow as the old saying goes;-)
Welcome~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/3/2003 |
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Oh...I liked this so much, rather beautiful and haunting...
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/3/2003 |
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| mae, welcome to the den, and thanks for sharing this wonderful write with us! (((HUGS))) :) a new friend in texas, karen lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
5/3/2003 |
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Mae,
Very nice... I nod and bow in retreat......Welcome
Rodney Evan Bohen |
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| Reviewed by a- maryllis |
5/3/2003 |
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very nice Mae... Welcome to the Den and much thanks for visiting mine. :)
Daniela |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/3/2003 |
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| the wait will be worth it... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/3/2003 |
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There are many layers in a few lines.This is excellent. Welcome to the Den, Mae.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by James D |
5/3/2003 |
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Mae, check your message board for some helpful hints about the Den.
-James |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
5/3/2003 |
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Liked this very much.
There is a certain resignation to it, haunting.
Welcome to the Den.
-James |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/3/2003 |
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| very deep thoughts you have.....silence is golden sometimes |
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