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Please Flush?
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Saturday, May 03, 2003

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This is not directed to anyone in piticular. Please don't be offended, it's just a thought of a poem from me. I hate seeing good authors leave. Art is by Ron, that's me I think?I have no intention of leaving


Did I mention
that I need attention?

Iím saying goodbye
this is no lie

I canít flush a little turd
who keeps giving me the bad word

Their comment has made me dwell
now my head has began to swell

Now I love all of you dear
so Iíll make this very clear

Iím tired of all this fighting.
or maybe Iím just burnt out on writing

I know I can delete the negative comment
but I still read it for the moment

Iím just not strong as all you others
why canít everyone be nice like Mother?

Donít have an attack
I may be back.

Ron Axelson
©5/4/03
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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/14/2003
so glad you aren't leaving, ron! that is really a load off my mind! :) you are a dear addition to ad, and i am honored to know you and call you "friend"! :) god bless you, sketchman! :) ((((((HUGS)))))) and love from texas, your friend, karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/6/2003
LOLOLOLOLOLOL...you are too, too much...fantastic poem, i'm with ya on this, and the drawing...priceless (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by A PAX 5/5/2003
LOL
wise guy!
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell 5/5/2003
Oh Ron lol you never fail to amaze me my friend. Thanks again for the morning smile ... hugs Sharron
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 5/4/2003
Your talent is mountain high !
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 5/4/2003
Don't GO!!!!!!!!!!! CUZZ....you are hysterically talented and the pic is fantastic!!!! I am new to the poetry comraderie and don't know about the ones leaving...BUT GET BACK HERE....YOU ARE NEEDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOO TALENTED TO WALK AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DO I need to send in the TIDYBOWL MAN????? TO SAVE YOU????
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 5/4/2003
no worries
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 5/4/2003
Ron,
As you know your leaving has saddened me as well as the rest of the family...as for those so called cousins...well we obviously can't flush them in that little itty bitty potty...hmmmmm will the outhouse at my family's hunting cabin up in nowhere land potter county do? ;O)
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/4/2003
Some turds are hard to flush away. Beware of them exploding in your face. Don't get too close.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 5/4/2003
I agree with Eileen and Trish. You know you are priceless...:-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/4/2003
LOL thanks for the humor! :-) Your the guy that makes people smile!
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 5/4/2003
This is funny, you always make me laugh. I have no intentions of leaving either. My lack of posting I will explain as my new posting. ;)
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader) 5/4/2003
This is funny! I enjoyed this humorous poem. It tickles my funny bone!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/4/2003
little turds who think they are big shits.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 5/4/2003
Great write....hee hee...great picture (as always) and great concept....Flush quickly - it hurts less :)
Reviewed by Tiana 5/4/2003
LOL You are too funny sweetie! I'm cracking up trying to type! LOL I needed the laugh, thanks, hun. And I couldn't agree with you more! ;-p (((hugs)))
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 5/4/2003
:) Ha, flush em as you see them, Ron! Thanks for the laugh!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/4/2003
I have a new name for authorden...
"Fla(u)shing Meadow's".....hehehehe...you a cracker!! Did you know that....I wondered what happened to my toilet "Mop"...now I see you got it....GIVE IT BACK NOW!!!!
They say if you are twit...stick to it.....or get flushed

LoL.....;o))))
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/4/2003
ha ha ha Great kool a funny one RON

Thanks ....William
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 5/3/2003
Hahahahaha This is a royal flush of a riot! LOL, OK OK, I know that was bad
But i'm still laughing at this
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 5/3/2003
LOL...flush them away!!!!
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 5/3/2003
te he he he he he he he he..YOUR SPIRIT IS SO ADORABLE...(Smiles)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/3/2003
Excellent Write Ron..Sure hate seeing so many excellent poets and people leave, it is just terrible,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Nancy D. 5/3/2003
Uplifting write, or is it going down, either way good humor.

Nancy
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/3/2003
hahahahahaha...you....bad boy. Like the art. I mentally do this when I see a turd, too. Smoooooooooooch.
Reviewed by jude forese 5/3/2003
excellent Ron... it's easy to flush away negativity by simply ignoring it... the more it is fed upon the more it festers...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/3/2003
Ron you are a treasure;-)!!!Thank you for this! it's what we need to laugh and get over it! imwitchyubaby...;-)xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewed by jing javier 5/3/2003
i really would like to know why some are leaving! like ive said, saddened me, but what can i do, right?

anyways, im trying to understand their reasons..

dont dare leave, k? =peace=

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