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Undone Again
by Katy L Walsvik

Sunday, May 04, 2003

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Undone again.
It comes on slowly,
Dawning, seeping in.
The reality that
You
Are leaving.

Undone again.
Truth has claws,
Kept sharp.
How else to guarantee
The scars?

Undone again.
Used up,
Alas, redundant.
Game.
Set.
Match.

This is from that dark place we all have.. not a reflection of today. (I know how some of you worry.. thank you.)

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Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader) 5/7/2003
I always keep the door to my "Dark place" slightly ajar for it can be the birth place of genious. I always enjoy your work Katy. Mal.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 5/7/2003
Powerfully spoken Katy....glad it isn't from today though. :)
Reviewed by Patrick Talty 5/4/2003
Here's a version of one of my favourite quotes:
"I write poetry
To see myself, to set the darkness echoing...." (Seamus Heaney, 'Personal Helicon')
Now, getting to your poem, Katy: You have shown here a great talent to confront your personal demons -even though they have been "disinfected". Your use of images and the brevity of your expression (aka lack of loquacity) enveloped in a muted tone of darkness is impressive and has resulted in a fine poem. Most citizens of the world will be able to relate to it because of its universality of theme. Good work, Katy.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/4/2003
I like it...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/4/2003
Checkmate, touche, what can I say? Shit happens.
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 5/4/2003
Yes, Katydid, we all have dark places. The trick is not to let them overflow. Maybe I'm overreacting, but I hope everything is all right with you. The second verse was especially lovely.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/4/2003
I agree with Tinka
I keep a flash light handy
Great write....
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/4/2003
if you worry you die...and if you don't worry you also die....so why the hell worry at all......lol........say hi to mr Oche okay!!

Love
tinka
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 5/4/2003
Whewwwwwwwwww
had me going this is so softly dark
Hugs Peggy
Reviewed by jude forese 5/4/2003
i keep a light on my dark places... good write!
Reviewed by Dee C. 5/4/2003
Dark feelings are what brings life to somes work....great write!
Dee
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/4/2003
A dark feeling!...

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/4/2003
Worry, What me worry?
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