|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dear Susan....Great great write...lovely write....profound yet again...love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|your poetry has been missed your golden words brings forth rainbows and sunshine
excellent .....write Susan
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So beautiful, somehow I been missing your poetry...so glad to have found it again!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Another beautiful one from you, Susan. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Pain is prevalant in this one. Well expressed. Hope you're OK|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
I have missed you here...
"My knees are weaker
Gone are the plans
You know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
Hand in hand humming
No reasoning denied "
this one feels so lonely and denied...
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|This is very good Susan, I especially liked the first 5 verses!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|very well penned down!!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Good write Susan!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$