|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Again you capivate me with this great expression, I enjoyed, really. GEM|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Truly inspired by a deep desire filled of nothing but tantalizing love. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|that is love and loving love
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|beautifully expressed...so romantic!|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|A swan of poetry with wings of a feathered caress.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so excellent! I just loved it!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Inspired by desire no doubt!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
steal all the time "now"
IT GETS SHORTER IN YOUR FUTURE
TIME STANDS STILL FOR NO ONE.
A FANTASTIC WRITE,
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Very beautiful, Marilyn.
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|Marilyn so lovely
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sweet one, Marilyn.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Marylyn, You did great that is so.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Marilyn, I think this piece is just magnificent! ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
I'm back to stay...lol
What a beautiful write
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh dear stolen hours of love; all I can do is reminisce, but alas this piece is so beautiful and inviting...especially to those BETTER memories! :O)
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Stollen hours always have to be repaid, don't they. They do around my house. Yes Dear, etc.|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Sometimes time passes much too quickly, while other times, it drags on forever. Beautiful!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Marilyn, wonderful poem. Time can steal away our moments but they can't take our memories.|
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|Straight to the heart with this one.... :)
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Oy, I am wrenched in two directions while reading this piece, Marilyn, wanting more for her, yet glad she is happy... I guess stolen is the key word, it sends a disquieting message to my mind. Great job! :)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very lovely seductive write Marilyn;-)|
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Watch out Marilyn, you can get 5-10 for that!...lol
Beautiful thoughts, beautifully written.