by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, May 06, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Ravaged Lady-for Pam
Ravished lady, sitting there,
with night's dark coals you flash and flare,
your voice rings sharp in reader's souls
from memories who's thoughts you hold,
twisting, weaving, shooting wide,
turning stunned minds outside in,
thrilled by words we hush ourselves
and savor nuance, space and time.
Ravished lady, typing there,
each stroke of keyboard sends out sparks,
they clang and clash and rush sublime,
unsettled by time's life-design.
Ravished lady, dreaming there,
you sweep all up without a care
and ride our souls to acme high,
to reave us with estatic sighs.
To Gilly-Woman's Chime
There dreams a lovely woman who
feels a need to know the why's
and understand the thoughts of
lives and get into the minds she sees,
carefully sifting through debris, and
cradling the worth she finds.
There loves a dreamy woman who
feels the length of rapid chime, and
writes in quickly shortened time
her ways and means of life,
while flourishing her wit at will
and cherishing the words.
And so this lady dreams and
loves and shares her spirit's soft
fierceness, showing friends her
touching side, she yearns for muse
only to find,
it was her shadow all along.
Deb actually got two, I was trying to cheer her up that night!
Lavender Girl-for Deb
who's feeling a'grump
I'll send you my smile
if you pour me a cup
of your special tea
with only one lump
to sweeten our night
and help give us a jump
on morrow's new day
with all it's speed bumps.
with garden divine
lends us her strength
when we feel resigned
of shortbread design
here's to your sweet words
that taste of rose wine.
vining light you do shine.
A brush of dancing color 'wares
dimmed soul's cries into the gloom,
shining spirit stops her path
and shares her thoughts with me.
"Humanness has mighty weight
to press upon your "self",
but you have worth,
you are alive, see here I am,
to let you know this truth".
Warmth spreads to me,
unchills my heart,
and helps to ease my mind.
Spirit tarries yet to talk to me,
assuring me all's right,
artist's colors beset my life,
I find hope can soar again.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/8/02
These are some of the women from the Poetry site I first started writing on, where I got my start. From the heart.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I liked this very much girl!!
funny one posted!! LOL
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Erin what a illuminating series of poetic tribute pieces...each with a reciever and meaning all it's own...and all of them together so meaningful and beautiful...GREAT WORK!!!!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Beautiful tribute Erin..
|Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader)
|Erin, your luminous soul always shines through your poetry, I am filled with gratitude to have you as my fellow poet friend. I am deeply honored by your poems, as you know. *smiles* (HUGS)
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Erin, these are beautiful and well written. I'm sure the tributes were well received.|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|A beautiful mold of verse creating one master write|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Excelent poetry .... Erin
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|This was so sweet... I loved the way you did these all in one but yet seperate... Just so sweet..|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|More tribute than poem.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I second E. you are a gem, and so is your work!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Erin, those are beautiful insights and tributes. You are a neat lady. I love your work. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Never rest your pen; don't let your quills dry.
Thanks for singing Paeans to our Goddesses.
Beautiful work... "Cyber Friends" are real too, and I enjoyed this buffet of ambrosias.
I Salute the Author of "Cyber Friends".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU