|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|spoken well. . .
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|..Aamie my dear friend..I live with the father of 'my sons' but that fact does nothing to make him care..thus your leaving the father of your sons was wise indeed..why? You have given yourself back to you..and your sons? ..They don't really need their father..for you have obviously been both...you see Aamie..mine have their's in their life but he is not of it!!..so in the end what our boys need is LOVE that's ALL!!
much love to you my friend..your poetry is always perfect in its conception and delivery...thankyou!!
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Aamie this is so full of meaning and sentiment...lovely heartfelt free verse!
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|hey, if my "another man's daughters" married your "another man's sons" we'd have the making of a sit-com ... or something ... excellent honest write, like seeing ghosts|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|What power you write with, and what strength I know you have, dear friend...and your sons are blessed to have you!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so heart wrenchingly beautiful,
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|this really moved me
I will be thinking about this all day
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Poingnent free verse, Aamie.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Nails in his heart.|
|Reviewed by ConradFV
|Fine looking happy lads you have there in the picture. Great pride spiced with finely powdered sighs in and on those lines. Thanks for the share, good Lady [cum strong Woman].|