|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I believe your soul knows exactly what it is made of! This is wonderful, and so true!
|Reviewed by June Thompson
|and raw I am
Inside and out
on and on
I continue to shout
and raw it is
the cold dark night
raw and empty
where nothing is right
wonderful poem richard
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Glad I found this at the end of the page. Well said my friend! Teresa|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage
|A fine work.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the flesh can also age with grace...
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
raw, always, in honesty and truth/searching always raw, unafraid to show that 'soul', and yet, the gentle heart within the
raw 'life' of this piece, makes genlte the
core, aching, maybe, but there, yes...
but that what is inside
what is done out of love...
and oh damn, richard, yes, 'sometimes it takes faith/to run with your heart'...
yes, and oh, what a simple, yet profound piece...and that 'faith to run with the heart'...i think it's here, within this piece...damn, just...life, life and choices/pain and aching and love....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|raw with a gentle touch and a spirit of truth...well said!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|WOW Richard so few words but one h*ll of a powerful punch to them...WELL DONE...EXCELLANT!
|Reviewed by jing javier
|little in words, more in meaning..|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|Got right to the gut with this one
and it is so true
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|another gem, richard.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh how much this one touches me, powerful, and so moving,
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Raw and yet well done|