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| Reviewed by David Mohd |
5/9/2003 |
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very good write.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/7/2003 |
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| very good write! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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| What a ride of bittersweet imagery...lovely work! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/7/2003 |
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| sadly beautiful imagery! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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| Well done, and ditto to everything said. A fine work, Mae. |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
5/7/2003 |
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Mae - Hi! Beautiful imagery! Especially like the crystal rain - Soon as you let go of the caged grief, the saline drops will shortly follow - Never hold back any anger, grief, or hatred - they scorch the soul!
Gal, you are: Beautiful, Young, Professional, Caring, Talented - ERGO it was his LOSS! keep up the good work - writing is therapeutic!
OH - and thanks for your advice on my "Honey " piece. Tom. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/7/2003 |
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| Bittersweet write!! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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cheer up spring rain always brings new promise.
very touching write |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
5/7/2003 |
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| Deep sorrow felt in this well written piece. ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
5/7/2003 |
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| very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/7/2003 |
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| What an expressive little love poem!! I can relate to its meaning, many times over. But it ended, now I personally will not cook my own goose. |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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Love isn't love, until it's lost.
Short, sweet, and very effective.
Love the phrasing in the third line.
-James
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/7/2003 |
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Very poignant, Mae. This brought tears to my eyes.Lovely writing.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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| Nice verse |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
5/7/2003 |
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| Painfully lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/7/2003 |
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| Mae, beautiful yet sad write. Love the opening line. |
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