|Reviewed by David Mohd
|very good write.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very good write!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|What a ride of bittersweet imagery...lovely work!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|sadly beautiful imagery!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well done, and ditto to everything said. A fine work, Mae.|
|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
|Mae - Hi! Beautiful imagery! Especially like the crystal rain - Soon as you let go of the caged grief, the saline drops will shortly follow - Never hold back any anger, grief, or hatred - they scorch the soul!
Gal, you are: Beautiful, Young, Professional, Caring, Talented - ERGO it was his LOSS! keep up the good work - writing is therapeutic!
OH - and thanks for your advice on my "Honey " piece. Tom.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|cheer up spring rain always brings new promise.
very touching write
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Deep sorrow felt in this well written piece. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|What an expressive little love poem!! I can relate to its meaning, many times over. But it ended, now I personally will not cook my own goose.|
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Love isn't love, until it's lost.
Short, sweet, and very effective.
Love the phrasing in the third line.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Very poignant, Mae. This brought tears to my eyes.Lovely writing.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Mae, beautiful yet sad write. Love the opening line.|