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| Reviewed by jing javier |
5/12/2003 |
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| crazy, alright! =) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/10/2003 |
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| this is excellent!! |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
5/9/2003 |
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I'm not a child
I thought you knew
wicked and wild
In time I grew
Tish tish
A mere wish
Candy dish
Spilled over
Four leaf clover
The luck I've had
The dreams gone bad
Makes me sad
I'm not a child
Innocent or sweet
But baby your writings
Can't be beat
E me when you can
Think of me when you will
You know me darlin...
You know I"m real |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/8/2003 |
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| I love this rhythm,I can dance to a beat like this...great word usage... |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
5/8/2003 |
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Richard,
This is really good! Sort of Trippy, but that is what makes it sooo good! Thanks for the ride!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/8/2003 |
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Ah Richard, I loved this, Loved the excellent beat to this!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
5/8/2003 |
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"threw spoonfuls at the stars", yea,,,,,,,,
and dig, she does
dug
she is
and diggin' this
rhythm of
soul
soul
soul
and life, man
like throwin
atomic
coolin
at
the
"SCARS'
love this
love it deep and dug
it , yea,,,,,,
you send me, man/searchin' man
poetman
to the moon
way the poet speaks
deep...deep
and
crazy, maybe
but lovin' it |
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| Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) |
5/8/2003 |
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| LOVE this |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/8/2003 |
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Love it Richard or should I say Daddy'O haha just kidding...seriously tho I really liked this the rythm and the flow I thought most excellant!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/8/2003 |
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man I miss this
wonderfully spit
b-boy beat |
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| Reviewed by Madame X |
5/8/2003 |
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| Richard this is excellence. I visualized a cool little jazz club, blues, smokey haze, and the mood of the moment. |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
5/8/2003 |
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| LOL at Ted....I really like the thoughts and feelings you conveyed in this. These words are so simple but hold a certain power that just make you like it. Thanks...Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/8/2003 |
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| got stuck on the mushrooms, then they wore off. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/8/2003 |
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richard,I love the beat poetry, "is
deep
and threw
spoonfuls
at the stars...."
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/7/2003 |
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| Sounds like Beat Generation poetry, and darn good, too. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/7/2003 |
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| very interesting choice of words... |
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