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Even In The Barren Heart Love Would Grow
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Thursday, May 08, 2003

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My inner psychological distortion
Distends the struggle with my mind
Yet, I discharge tension not with anger
But with the massacre of my thoughts
In my endeavor to recognize the love
The love that I have sheltered for you
In the multicolored garden of my heart
Though I substantiate, you love me not
Since there resides not your love for me
In the transient desert of your arid heart
But let me announce now very candidly
Taking the pledge of Heavenly love Gods
That I will love you forever and will
Never abscond you but will ever hold you
Closer to my heart, beneath the parasol
Of my ceaseless love, watering your dry
Heart with the water of love, for I know
That even in the barren heart, love would grow
If the heart is irrigated with the water of adore

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/10/2003
Awesome write Bhuwan!!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/8/2003
Excellent my friend
a wonderful write

Reviewed by Lynn Barry 5/8/2003
Never heard it all put in such a watery way and yet I've always told my family that water cures all ills..."take a warm bath"..."soak your hands in dish water"...very nice
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/8/2003
Beautifully said Bhuwan...
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 5/8/2003
Excellant the feelings this gives...Beautiful Work Bhuwan! Love can grow anywhere if the hearts bearer is willing to recieve! :O)
Reviewed by Christine Morell 5/8/2003
A stunning poem, Bhuwan. I love to read your work.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/8/2003
Lovely poem..
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/8/2003
This was so beautiful, What a lovely poem to read this morning!

Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/8/2003
Great piece! Excellent!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 5/8/2003
Just lovely, Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/8/2003
Excellent verse
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/8/2003
Bhuwan, beautiful poem. Your heart is in the right place.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 5/8/2003
Good Morning, Bhuwan
Your a ten poetry man!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 5/8/2003
This is outstanding in verses and expression,
"That even in the barren heart, love would grow
If the heart is irrigated with the water of adore "
Just beautiful my friend.. Claping
Love n Peace
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 5/8/2003
Bhuwan, what a beautiful poem. But how can one love forever when the loved one is barren in her heart? Thank you for your comment on "A Castle In The Sand." And that is what this song is about. ... Loving someone who has a cold, barren heart, and who just sees me as a sick old man. (Which I am.) But I know I am much more than that. Good luck my friend. Your friend Bill
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