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  A Walk Down The Hall
by William Bonilla
Thursday, May 08, 2003


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Awaken
In the darkness of my room
unable to sleep
My Mother walked in
Looking as beautiful as ever
Behind her walked in a man
Dressed in a gray suit
Gray hair, a sad solemn
Druid looking face
I was shaken.

I asked who is he?
She replied
I don't know my son
Must be a doctor, I thought
She smiled, with sparkling eyes
Lets walk down the hall
To me, she whispered
I grabbed my robe
We exit the room
All seemed quiet
No one up or down the hall.

No doctors nor nurses rushing
We walked towards the end
something was differnt
There was no wall at the end
I could see daylight
Like it was the most beautiful
Spring day in May.

Mother walked towards
The light
I followed her, for a while
She stopped
With her lovely smile
Said
This is as far, as you can go
Why I asked?
I wish to continue
It's so beautiful there
Sorry my son, she said
You have to accompany "Him"
Pointing, towards old sour puss
In the Gray suit
Who was walking
In the opposite direction.

By: William Bonilla
5/04/03






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Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Your poems always feel so real. In this case it was chilling to say the least.

Adam
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Interesting William, "opposite direction."
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Interesting and unique, so real yet unreal.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
this has so much depth of feeling William, really moves one, great work!
Reviewed by jude forese
excellent!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
To the very end I was locked in.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
A very compelling piece...very unique!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Whew William this had me goosebumps to tears and all every step of the way! Excellantly Done!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Oh, William.. there are goosebumps on my goosebumps.. the way you unfold this and bring us to its ending is gentle and quiet, yet the impact of realization is absolutely stunning.. I have never read of death with such sensitivity.. a beautiful piece. katy.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
;( Man....!!! Have any tissues for me?

Teresa
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Oh dear, This one got to me, so beautiful, so very well done, I loved this so much, just touched me deeply,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Hey William,
You had me going there with that peaceful start.You can actually just change a couple of sentences and stay as peaceful. I still like the last couple of lines.Great write again my friend.


tony
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Very powerful! An excellent piece, William
Chrissie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Powerful write!!
Love
tinka
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Wonderful...
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Well, William...this message is deep. I, too, want to see the lighted end of the hall, but through it, also! Thank you.
-Bear
Reviewed by Paul Berube
William, very well written. Hope I get to see the lighted end of the hall.
Reviewed by Jeff Alu
Powerful write!
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