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In Another Time
by Marilyn Seray

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In another time where I
walked on air, you pulled
me into the vortex of your
thoughts and then haunted
my dreams

In another time where I
walked on air, you came for
me on silent footsteps and
took my hand

In another time where I
walked on air, you kissed
my lips and took me under

In another time where I
walked on air, you initiated
the first drops of moisture
to infuse a raging storm

In another time where I
walked on air, we became
one dream lost in another

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 5/12/2003
Exceptional and inspiring work, Marilyn.
Reviewed by Patrick Talty 5/11/2003
This is vintage free verse at its best, Marilyn: A rhythmic journey enhanced by appropriate repetition together with a gentle yet positive progression of theme from beginning to end. I enjoyed reading it and have assigned it to "my library" for future visits!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/11/2003
In this time, you captivated my heart with this nice gone beyond a regular poem, super. GEM
Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader) 5/11/2003
In another time - Sometimes that is all there ever was. Outstanding write.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 5/11/2003
A beautiful and stunning piece, Marylin. :)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/11/2003
This was quite excellent!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 5/11/2003
On the air I float breathing in the beauty of this write.

PS thank you so much for all your wonderful comments on Maria's and My work
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 5/10/2003
Beautiful write, Marilyn.
Have a great weekend,
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 5/10/2003
This is compelling, awesome work, Marilyn.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 5/10/2003
Awesome fantasy write Marilyn! ~Joseph
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 5/10/2003
Marilyn this is definitely one dreamy, haunting FABULOUS WRITE!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/10/2003
Beautiful write!!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 5/9/2003
Dear Marilyn, Another beautiful write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone 5/9/2003
Beautiful dreamy write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 5/9/2003
Hi Marilyn,
Another one of your
beautiful writes..

Thank you for your
kind comment on mine..
It was fiction.. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/9/2003
Beautiful write!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/9/2003
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/9/2003
deeply haunting vortex of the mind I love it;-)!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 5/9/2003
Deep emotions you have tugged on. Thanks, Teresa
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/9/2003
Marilyn, this is a stunning piece. Bravo.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/9/2003
Excellen Marylin....
This is hot suff
you said it Peggy, That drop did it
beautifully expressed


Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 5/9/2003
hmmm makes me melancholy

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