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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/12/2003 |
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Exceptional and inspiring work, Marilyn.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Talty |
5/11/2003 |
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| This is vintage free verse at its best, Marilyn: A rhythmic journey enhanced by appropriate repetition together with a gentle yet positive progression of theme from beginning to end. I enjoyed reading it and have assigned it to "my library" for future visits! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/11/2003 |
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| In this time, you captivated my heart with this nice gone beyond a regular poem, super. GEM |
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| Reviewed by Shadow Writer |
5/11/2003 |
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| In another time - Sometimes that is all there ever was. Outstanding write. |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
5/11/2003 |
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| A beautiful and stunning piece, Marylin. :) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/11/2003 |
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This was quite excellent!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
5/11/2003 |
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On the air I float breathing in the beauty of this write.
PS thank you so much for all your wonderful comments on Maria's and My work
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
5/10/2003 |
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Beautiful write, Marilyn.
Have a great weekend,
Jill |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/10/2003 |
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| This is compelling, awesome work, Marilyn. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
5/10/2003 |
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| Awesome fantasy write Marilyn! ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/10/2003 |
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Marilyn this is definitely one dreamy, haunting FABULOUS WRITE!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/10/2003 |
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| Beautiful write!! |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
5/9/2003 |
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Dear Marilyn, Another beautiful write!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
5/9/2003 |
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| Beautiful dreamy write! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
5/9/2003 |
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Hi Marilyn,
Another one of your
beautiful writes..
Thank you for your
kind comment on mine..
It was fiction.. :)
Hugs,
Trixie |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/9/2003 |
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| Beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/9/2003 |
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| yeah! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/9/2003 |
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| deeply haunting vortex of the mind I love it;-)! |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
5/9/2003 |
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| Deep emotions you have tugged on. Thanks, Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/9/2003 |
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| Marilyn, this is a stunning piece. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/9/2003 |
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Excellen Marylin....
This is hot suff
you said it Peggy, That drop did it
beautifully expressed
William
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
5/9/2003 |
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| hmmm makes me melancholy |
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