|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent flow to this sensuous delight...|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Erica, Excellent writing. I am surprised of your style change. It got to my senses.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Work it ! Smile great write|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Whoa...This one Rocks...just so powerful and intense, God I loved this one,
You are outstanding,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
I wave the white flag to you today.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|yes you can!!!!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Ha, you got the power, Erica! And it is in your words as well as your touch! :)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Startling ending. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|oh my, like a punch in the gut this one ends. I like it though.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You are too much.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|WOW OH WOW Erica this is awesome and totally TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!