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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/11/2003 |
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| flows superbly! |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
5/11/2003 |
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| Hi young lady, glad you're here writing! Pain is a dreadful experience, but I'm hoping that you will write lots of expressive poems here, not necessarily about pain or death, but hopefully about the things that you love, that you see, about your feelings and your surroundings!!! This may help to take your mind off some of the more depressive happenings in you life!!! Good poem, I get your message. Keep writing! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/11/2003 |
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Well done.
Kinda sucky for Mother's Day. But still a good poem. [smiles] |
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