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Melissa C. Rives

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Black Days
by Melissa C. Rives

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When it creeps in and the light wanes...

If I could throw away this madness
that has flawed my soul so deep…
I’d savor every golden moment
praying God my soul to keep.

For when it smothers me in sadness
it’s my heart that skips a beat…
While I cannot unmask its darkness
into self I must retreat.

As if the sun could not embrace me
for the clouds become my shroud…
Alone I wander in the coldness
far away from life and crowd.

For just a moment I can taste it
like a drug that numbs the mind…
Familiar tangle in the cobwebs
‘till my will it has confined.

Becomes the monster I can’t tame
that prowls and goes straight for the vein…
Until the silence is too loud for me
to bear its weight of pain.

Yet fight I will though it may conquer
I shall never cease to try…
I will not give away my hope
nor just allow my soul to die.





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Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
Gracefully, brilliantly written poem for those of us who have had to face monsters ...
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
very strong writing about being strong in all lifes little shadows.
keep a candle burning and keep writing
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
.....and your pen shall be your salvation! Great expression!
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Melissa your writing craft is beautiful love your magnetic masterpiece it captured me
Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Melissa,
Ah yes, well done..ah the pen, its radiance scatters all the despotic bands of dark,in yes....one swift mark of penned ink spilled to parchment.
Rodney Evan Bohen

For just a moment I can taste it
like a drug that numbs the mind…
Familiar tangle in the cobwebs
‘till my will it has confined.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
I love poems with a dark edge Melissa....this is fantastic..ty, Dani
Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com
great descriptives and nice transistions from verse to verse... I hope to read more soon.


God Bless,
Tim
Reviewed by jude forese
a masterpiece of persepctive and control!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Not for a moment should the thought enter a mind of such giftedness, that can write like others would give an arm for.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Perfect....classic!!!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Wow..I liked this very much, Loved what you had to say here,
Yet fight I will though it may conquer
I shall never cease to try…
I will not give away my hope
nor just allow my soul to die.



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