|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Gracefully, brilliantly written poem for those of us who have had to face monsters ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|very strong writing about being strong in all lifes little shadows.
keep a candle burning and keep writing
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|.....and your pen shall be your salvation! Great expression!|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Melissa your writing craft is beautiful love your magnetic masterpiece it captured me|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Ah yes, well done..ah the pen, its radiance scatters all the despotic bands of dark,in yes....one swift mark of penned ink spilled to parchment.
Rodney Evan Bohen
For just a moment I can taste it
like a drug that numbs the mind…
Familiar tangle in the cobwebs
‘till my will it has confined.
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|I love poems with a dark edge Melissa....this is fantastic..ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Timothy Flaherty
|great descriptives and nice transistions from verse to verse... I hope to read more soon.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a masterpiece of persepctive and control!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Not for a moment should the thought enter a mind of such giftedness, that can write like others would give an arm for.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..I liked this very much, Loved what you had to say here,
Yet fight I will though it may conquer
I shall never cease to try…
I will not give away my hope
nor just allow my soul to die.