My winding road..... (poem) by Marlene Dawn on AuthorsDen

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1.	G R A S S


2.	The Note


3.	An Already Complicated Life


4.	Moonlit Night


5.	MY SOMETHING WICKED THIS WAY COMES


6.	Ride the Wild Crocodile


7.	Roses Of Grace


8.	For The Missing


9.	The Liar


10.	The Oregon Trail


11.	Those Lips


12.	Reliving the Sins


13.	Life is a Gamble


14.	Now Our Grown man But Always our Son


15.	Mother The Garden Is Lovely

My winding road..... by Marlene Dawn Monday, May 12, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan Copyright Š2003 Marlene Bowring
Driving along the narrow winding road. Which direction will I go next? The uncertainty of the outcome, lead my body form to hesitate. You might be at the end of that path. Wanting me to be the face you see. Love might drive the force within. This time Can I hold you tighter. Driving along the narrow winding road. You might not be at the end of my path. Sadness will flow all over me. I will lay down grasping the soil. You may not be the end of my road. Standing there to greet me. Sometimes love isn't everything. It takes more from you and me. Driving along the wider winding road. I'll choose what is best for me. To bring my soul the happiness. I need to survive on the land. Cuz you are not the end of my road. I will need to have more consistancy. So I can build the life I love. And be fine always living for me.

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Reviewed by Christine Morell	5/14/2003

Wonderful imagery. Excellent, Marlene. Chrissie




*Reviewed by OnepoetGem the Poetic Rapper**	5/13/2003

"and be fine always living for me" good piece and good reminder. GEM




Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya	5/13/2003

This is well expressed write...well done....love n luck...BHUWAN




Reviewed by jude forese	5/12/2003

well done...




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	5/12/2003

Well-done, Marlene! Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Tony Nerone	5/12/2003

Dear Marlene, I liked this alot.Only one word, I would have said excellent! Tony




Reviewed by Dale Clark	5/12/2003

Powerful expression and imagery!




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	5/12/2003

Nice......




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/12/2003

nice progression of thought,well written!