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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
5/13/2003 |
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Timothy,
"I watch,longing
for those memories,
echoed
all around."
It is haunting at times! This is a deep, and great write!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/13/2003 |
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loved your way with words
enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/12/2003 |
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| Verrrrry well written!! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/12/2003 |
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A KOOL WRITE TIM
WILLIAM |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/12/2003 |
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| Well done. Like it muchly. Ted is insane but harmless. [smiles] |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
5/12/2003 |
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Simple but that's all it needs to be. One little nitpick: It's Echoes. You have a possessive here when you want a plural. (Damn grammar goddess). Short poem but sweet.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/12/2003 |
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| This is so melancholy Timothy, I feel tears inside;-)Bless you~ |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
5/12/2003 |
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| this is lovely. LOL to Ted |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/12/2003 |
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| YOU YOU YOU DID DID DID THAT WELLLLLLLL |
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