|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Wow, Paul! This one captivated me. I'd love to know what inspired this. Different for you, yet it holds your talent for drawing emotion and compassion from the reader. Eerie imagery. I can't help but imagine myself in this position. Bravo! Love and Hugs.
|Reviewed by Jim McClellan
|this is like the prelude to a dark dream. I am left only to imagine. I think I felt a chill while reading it. Excellent!
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|This was fabulous, Paul.
You just changed my writing style.I really liked it.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Wow, what an intense
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Sadness written so well|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Terrific Paul. What an expressive piece. Think I'll do one. enjoyed GEM|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Very well written Paul....Haunting yep you bet....Intense and real.....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This is sad, and yes haunting. I watched a very dear person to me in a coma, and there was nothing I could do, but talk to her and pray that she heard me.
There is a lot of pain here.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|so very powerful and haunting, this was so well done!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh this is powerful, and haunting.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Sara, Yes and Yes.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Scary. Open those eyes !!!|
|Reviewed by Sara Russell
|Very dramatic write. It seems to be about someone who is in a coma or dying, unable to understand why their loved one by the bed can't hear their thoughts. Is the other person an angel at the end? ......Sara|
|Reviewed by A PAX
wow times a trillion
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Ooooh! Aching piece. Well well done!
|Reviewed by Lee Ennis
|An excellent piece, Paul!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A stunning poem, Paul.Very gripping and intense.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
whow this one set me back it is haunting and the expressions so excellent.
"Don't let go. Don't leave. I'm sorry.
I can take the darkness as long as
there is you. Are you here? My body's
gone with the pain. I'm not alone.
It's not you. Who is it ? Answer me. "
Thankyou was caught up into this one.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Right there with you ........know that feeling all too well....this was painfully beautiful Paul!!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Paul....very very powerful write from the heart...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|So many times we seem invisible.
Wow Paul this is so haunting and riviting
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Hey Paul, I think you don't want to know. Dark|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|I understand the feelings the darkness... Not knoing what to do.. who is to blame.. Why the tears fall... this was painfully beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Bill
|Beautiful poem Paul. Deeply intense filled with agony. The words screamed out at me.
Wow! Excellent. Great poem! Bill
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Errie and sad write done very well.|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Incredible write, my friend..
Intense...I've read it three
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Great one, Paul! I especially like"
"I can take the darkness as long as there is you."
Very good words indeed!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$