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| Reviewed by Candida Eittreim |
5/27/2003 |
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Josefina,
You evoked us all with this absolutely sensational poem. His love shines through your words, like a pure white diamond.
Candida |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/13/2003 |
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| Fabulously wonderful write...love n luck...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/13/2003 |
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Fantastic write ....josie
William |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/13/2003 |
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| my mother used to cut my sandwich in an X and I always thought that was so gay, that when I grew up I eat my bread uncut. Wish she had told the doctor that delivered me that. |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
5/13/2003 |
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Josie,
This is what real love is between two people.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Shadow Writer |
5/13/2003 |
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| You have painted the purest picture of love that I have ever seen.... Well done Josie. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/13/2003 |
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| excellent detail... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/13/2003 |
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Very good imagery. Beautifully-done!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/13/2003 |
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This was so lovely, and beautiful,
so Excellent!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
5/13/2003 |
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| So swet... Must be love.. You see so much!! |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/13/2003 |
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Would love to see this display of genuine love and affection more often. I love the way you see these things in their existence for they do serve as evidence that love conquers all superficial barriers.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/13/2003 |
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| (((josie))) i wanna be her...swollen ankles and all...now THAT is what true love means, it's not based on appearance...oh, i loved this! chivalry is NOT dead...halleluia! :) well done, josie! :) *applause* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) *grinning widely* |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
5/13/2003 |
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Josefina,
I feel your writing style shines and glimmers upon and within this delicately woven piece. Not all eyes would have captured such an exquisite tribute to love and adoration standing tall, I salute your eye not all have, may you see well, then record what you see! No more can mere man ask....
Rodney Evan Bohen |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
5/13/2003 |
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You captured this precious real-life moment so well! Thanks for sharing!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
5/13/2003 |
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Josie,
This is very touching. Ha, who would have thought, there is really love like this out there! I think me needs to relocate!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
5/13/2003 |
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| YES, your best Josie. tender loving and compassionate. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/13/2003 |
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| this is so beautiful!! |
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| Reviewed by Digital Fairy |
5/13/2003 |
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Ohh!! this was so touching... so sweet!
--Karissa |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/13/2003 |
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OMG Josie offers his love this is so beautiful
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
5/13/2003 |
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Josie, I'm awash in memory trying to think of the last time somebody cut my sandwich. Time for me to have a little talk with the boyfriend, methinks.
P.S. I liked yesterday's poem, too! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/13/2003 |
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| Nice........about those swollen ankles. [smiles] |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/13/2003 |
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me too wonderful detailing
this is my kind of reading!! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
5/13/2003 |
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| I'm with Eileen...you serve up the best slice of life I ever tasted....good stuff Josie Grrrrrl. ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/13/2003 |
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| You have a way of capturing a moment like no one else I know! Josie girl never stop writing! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/13/2003 |
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| Josie, this is beautiful labor of love. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/13/2003 |
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| i would like to be her too, labelle, but i would need help out of the car; i can't get up very well from low spots! :) but once i have my crutches ready, then i am okay, and i can get myself out; it's when i try to raise my hips and seat from the seat when i have the most trouble! LOL good write, josie; nice to see gallantry still prevelent in today's society! :) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/13/2003 |
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and I want to be her
swollen ankles and all
Oh Josie, this speaks volumes to the heart. This is absolutely one of your very best. Touched me deeply. |
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