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Tonya I

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Leaving
by Tonya I

Tuesday, May 13, 2003

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Dedication to a motion picture - "A Walk To Remember"
11.05.2003


You're leaving forever
There is nothing I can do
Fear is taking over,
Sadness fulfills everything.
There is no hope,
Not a thing I can do
Like sand through my fingers,
You're slipping away.
Torture of my soul
Eternal feeling within
So much you've taught me
How can this be?
You are leaving everyone behind,
To God I turn with confusion
Why oh why,
Take my angel away?
Looking behind me, I had no life
Until you came and showed me
Everything in this world -
How to look at it right.
Just like you said,
You feel the wind...
My love for you is just as that,
I cannot see it, but
I can really feel it.

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Reviewed by 5/13/2003
Beautifully written, touching and sad! I read the book and yet to see the movie. This write stirred many emotions...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/13/2003
This one reminds me of one of my own poem. Excellent write!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/13/2003
Beautifully done.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 5/13/2003
Poignant and very beautiful
Chrissie
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 5/13/2003
A well done expressive poem.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 5/13/2003
Very heartwrenching write. Love the last four lines.

~Joseph
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 5/13/2003
So sadly beautiful!!!
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