|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|This is very good.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|EXCELLENT AS USUAL FROM U!!!`|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
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|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Oh I know this feeling too well.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Old School Better No School . All!
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Never throw the towel in, your stronger than that, great write.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Pick up your skirts and re-invent yourself. Life is good. Lemonade is good.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ha! (as you have so often said so well).. 'gumption.. moxie.. will"??? You? Why, Josie, I thought those were your middle names.. Worry not, for you are a red balloon filled with talent and gusto.. and NOONE here has anything sharp to burst you.. My god, woman, but you are a fantastic "self-examiner".. a lesson to us all.. Great job. katy.|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Lass, 'tis often in our sincere and earnest and passionate pursuit of self, when imbued in the very same passion, that a release of fragrance from our very soul takes place and issues forth, showering all those about us in good, as a wind and hail of fire and fine, As as welcomed and wet shower in summertime, it refreshes,bathes, cools the soul of those about us in good. Good write young lady, oh, the sword remains not heavy when passion remaineth her wings.
Rodney Evan Bohen
can I not just cradle myself in selfish
just this once just this now
what I want?
it is not so
cannot be thus
with broken heart I retire
but know this
my heart is here this parchment this moment
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I can relate to this soooooo well!!
Take a nice full glass of juice with vodka or any thing else.......relax.......and be yourself.....this is a demand......from the "Orange Lady".......lol
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|YOU HAVE WHAT IT TAKES TO MAKE IT, NO MATTER WHAT. BUT I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THE 'I
M JUST TOO TIRED TO DO IT AGAIN' FEELING I PICKED UP IN THIS POEM. GOOD WORK
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You have your pulse on the heart of humanity Josie, I believe your pen will get you what you want one day. You have the power to hang in, you are still young enough , but yes, some of the vigor is gone the motivation to keep going needs renewing,I hope you get some help!We all need co-pilot's when we want to fly high...|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Josie, this is excellent and remember, " the power of the pen."|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|outstanding write, josie! just write what is in your heart, and to heck with all the naysayers! :) (((HUGS))) love ya, sweetie! :)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
"i am not the same
as i was at twenty
i am not the warrior i once was
i fear i will have beat the horse
you capture it perfectly...arrrgggghhhhhh, life stinks! all these responsibilities, and all you wanna do is right...WRITE...
follow you heart, do what's right for josie...
i love this...you are real!
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Josie, I've never read anything that so aptly reflected the deepest feelings of my heart. This is exceptional, only someone who has lived this can really understand the depths of it. Thank you for sharing your heart with me.|
|Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield
|Very good write! I totally relate and I really like the last part, "my heart is here this parchment this moment
as I take up my sword yet again
in the jungle
that is life." Thank you for sharing this!
- J -